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Manila

Oh Manila, I lost my heart in thee On a summer's eve of sunset red I saw her under the coconut tree My Violy, and wanted her to wed. In Manila we stirred the ballroom dust As we danced the loneliness away Then gave into our mutual lust As both of our defenses gave way! Oh Manila, dire passions burn in thee Whose women steal men's hearts in bed I lost my first love to the Lady Violy When she confessed she was already wed. Timothy I. Brumley

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/4/2010 1:05:00 AM
Your title caught my eye Timothy since I am from the Philippines...Ouch for you... This is heartbreaking :/ - On behalf of other Filipinas--sorry for the heartbreak... wish you the best in the contest-- nikko :)
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Date: 8/1/2010 4:45:00 PM
Oh my, deception can creep up on you and knock you out, Tim. Very intriguing story behind this poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/1/2010 1:12:00 PM
Manila has fond memories for u Timothy and a great entry for Debbie ..good luck my friend.. my entry is "Volare" about Italy... where LUV is KING.. enjoy this happy Sunday.. with luv..
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Date: 8/1/2010 11:56:00 AM
Ha ha,she was already wed,passionate and beautiful. .C.C
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Date: 8/1/2010 11:52:00 AM
nice one , good luck in the contest Tim, should do well
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