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Mango

Mellow mango, red gold,
Myriad ways to eat,
Marvel of June smoothies,
Munchable with ice cream.
Mesmerizing pink moon
meets orchard of delight,
Mulberry sun comes soon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Y. Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 6:51 AM
Hi Evelyn, Your well-written "Pleiade" reminds me of why I love mangos. Well done. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 11:41 AM
Hi Alexis, Thank you very much for your delightful remarks. I hope your day is nice. :) Evelyn
Kendrick Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 2:51 AM
Creative way to go with this winner. Congratulations on your work being on the winners' list. Sara
Buehler Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 11:35 AM
Thank you so much, Sara. :)
Baker Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 4:18 PM
Congrats on your win, Evelyn! Yeah!!! A fine Pleaides, on a tasty subject. Thanks for sharing! Bill
Buehler Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 8:30 PM
Quite welcome, Bill. Thank you so much for your warm, uplifting remarks. Very best wishes, Evelyn
Jones Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 10:31 AM
Congrats on your win for a well written poem!
Buehler Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 11:51 AM
Thank you very much, Karen.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 5:17 AM
Wonderful! Congratulations, Evelyn!
Buehler Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 11:50 AM
Deepest thanks, Kim.
Andresen Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 4:12 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the Pleiades 5 Poetry Contest, Evelyn :) -
Buehler Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 11:50 AM
Deepest thanks, Anne-Lise. :)
May Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 5:58 PM
Very nicely penned Evelyn, Congrats on your win
Buehler Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 7:39 PM
Thank you so much for your warm congratulations, Joseph. I enjoyed your contest a lot.
Rolland Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 3:06 PM
a gorgeous and wonderful poem, to the glory of mango, my favorite fruit, i am going to eat some tomorrow, thanks for the exquisite moment Evelyn
Buehler Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 7:37 PM
You are most welcome, Yann. Thank you for your delightful comment. :)
Bowring Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 8:46 AM
A gorgeous Pleiades dear Evelyn. So wonderfully described that it makes you want to eat one! I love ,’Mulberry sun come soon’. Glorious! Good luck in the contest :)
Buehler Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 11:41 AM
Thank you so much for your kind thoughts and well wishes. Blessings.
Empress Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 6:15 AM
I love mangoes, its one of my fave fruit, but i couldnt think of how i can write about it, and here you write effortlessly a beautiful pleiades, I especially love “ myriad ways to eat it” “ mesmerizing pink moon” mulberry sun comes soon” wow! This is gorgeous! Love it! Definitely a winner
Buehler Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 11:38 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely remarks, and for the inspiriting vote of confidence. Blessings.
Pandit Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 5:57 AM
Your poem is a treat, Evelyn--as sweet as the mango it describes. I simply love the fruit. Enjoyed your descriptions.
Buehler Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 11:35 AM
I appreciate your remarks so much. Thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 1:14 AM
Your poem is indeed an orchard of delight. Great Pleiades. Best for a win. Blessings
Buehler Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 11:34 AM
Thank you for the joy of your uplifting comment. :)
Poet Avatar
September 18, 2023 at 6:36 PM
Evelyn, Your exquisitely composed poem ignited a craving within me! I savored every word. Mango juice enthralls my senses, yet the fruit itself possesses a subtle tanginess that adds an unexpected twist to its lusciousness.
Buehler Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 11:33 AM
Thank you for your thrilling comment, which brings sunshine to this rainy day. :)
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