Man of My Own

Man Of My Own 
   ( part 3 )

My son, your wedding approaches now so fast 
we proudly share in your love and coming joys. 
Please, be kind to her always and make it last 
and gift us several little girls and boys! 

Never forget your dear father's sage advice, 
hold on to our family's principled views. 
Never sacrifice honor at any price, 
eternally give her the love she is due! 

As life brings its trials and great tribulations, 
look to heaven when in dark desperate straits. 
There gifted to us are true celebrations, 
often with the shields that ward off evil fates. 

As my dearest son, you have now made me proud, 
with family you are now about to start. 
In life celebrate and sing out to her loud, 
soon you will be joined with another dear heart! 

****             ****             ****

Father, how much I miss you words can't say,
since your death life has never been the same.
First it was difficult and skies seemed grey,
I should have been with you, not seeking fame.

Beautiful memories of times gone by,
sadden me as you are not by my side.
Each photograph I look at makes me cry,
fills me with guilt for every time I lied.

When I have a problem I look for you,
but then realize you're not here to talk.
Your words of wisdom will always be true,
that made me strong since the day I could walk.

Father your legacy lives on with me,
despite my destiny not being known,
I will continue our family tree,
your love has made me a man of my own.

Robert J. Lindley & SilentOne (collaboration)
2-27-2016

Note: This is third and last poem in the three part series.
that I have been blessed to work on with very talented friend
SilentOne. His answers to my(a father's) loving advice to a son 
living far away are simply awesome IMHO!
Has been my honor to compose with such a gentleman and fantastic talent..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 2/29/2016 10:36:00 AM
A most lovely collaboration, Robert and S1. A true father always wants the best for his children. ~ Sorry to hear about the family loss...my thoughts are with you and your wife, my friend. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/28/2016 8:58:00 AM
Sorry my friend, I had no time to post our poem yesterday because my wife's brother died early yesterday morn in the Philippines. He was only 32 years old and it was a sudden death. We endure the sad in life, so as to be able to embrace and hold its joys. Her mother passed in June, now her brother--sad..
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Date: 2/28/2016 8:40:00 AM
Finally, you posted.;) A very fitting finale' to the collaboration. You've served your son well with great advice...lol Well done, Robert.
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