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Man of Broken Heart

No one sees dry tears continuous soundless pain a dear gentle man Speaks sweet words always always do fine behavior helps the needy one Man of broken heart dies with a smiling face near All say happy death

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/28/2012 9:35:00 PM

BL, great haiku.. much meaning.. thank you for sharing,..p.d.

Date: 1/28/2012 9:38:00 PM

Many thanks my friend for your comment,bl

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/28/2012 10:31:00 AM

A very touching set of haiku, BL. Nice work. Love, Kim

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/28/2012 1:11:00 PM

Many thanks, my sweet friend, for your comment, loved, bl

John Rhinem

Date: 1/28/2012 9:01:00 AM

Ps. Smile ˜ Thank you sweeetheart, for your beauties kind and lovely visit * Love always, John!:) ˜

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/28/2012 1:10:00 PM

Thanks, my friend, loved your sweet comment, bl

John Rhinem

Date: 1/28/2012 8:06:00 AM

Smile ˜ Its sooo very hard sometimes in a world that can't seem to see past their own eyes * Always casting these their hooks in blind ˜ Smile, that's the real pain and one should find a smile knowing, its a beautiful day * Love, John!:) ˜

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/28/2012 8:14:00 AM

Many thanks for reading my write and for wonderful comment on it, bl