Man Lived By a River

There was a man who lived by a river
Wasn’t a taker but a giver
Gave away his only vest
Cos his friend was cold and perplexed.
Now all he can do is shiver
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Eastman Avatar
December 30, 2012 at 6:14 PM
Your limericks have all been cool!
Roberts Avatar
December 30, 2012 at 6:22 PM
Blwyddyn newydd dda i chi Happy New Year to you.....Seren
Sivey Avatar
December 29, 2012 at 9:42 AM
This is a wonderful limerick my friend! I really loved this enjoyable and fantastic poem this morning! You have presented a tremendous and clever piece! Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
December 30, 2012 at 10:21 AM
thanks Russell just having light relief with these limericks..Seren
Komala Avatar
December 29, 2012 at 9:34 AM
so lovely...:) :) :) enjoyed your nice share Seren...<3 SK
Roberts Avatar
December 30, 2012 at 10:22 AM
lol just having fun with some limericks....Seren
Harrell Avatar
December 29, 2012 at 8:11 AM
Ohh, what an endearing man. Gave the clothes off his back! Awesome write, Seren. Love it :)
Roberts Avatar
December 30, 2012 at 10:23 AM
Aww Toquyen he is good isnt he... having some fun with limericks of sorts
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 29, 2012 at 7:42 AM
He sent it to me ,have you seen my limericks? lol xx
Roberts Avatar
December 30, 2012 at 10:25 AM
yes i read and commented hun ...Seren
Cavanaugh Avatar
December 29, 2012 at 7:39 AM
I've read all 6 of your limericks. Loved them all. Looking forward to the next one. The new year is almost here. Wishing you the best.
Roberts Avatar
December 30, 2012 at 10:24 AM
Thank you Jon....best wishes to you and yours too...Seren
Palmer Avatar
December 29, 2012 at 7:18 AM
pray for his goodness,may the Almighty grant him a warmer one,amen,great write Seren
Roberts Avatar
December 29, 2012 at 7:21 AM
Lol Richard, Having fun writing these silly limericks. Thanks for stopping by
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