Man Dangling

Man Dangling

The jump was from a 12 story building roof
Glass bursting out from intense heat 
Below, flames enveloped each floor
Engulfed them, every room, fire and flame 
An aluminum pole stood adjacent to the site
A ghost like image leaps in desperation
Fear motivates those covered in fear   
Griped in panic with shaky hands
Grasping chance
12 stories down don’t really tell the tale
He climbed up to reach the pinnacle
14 stories high he stood alone
Too frightened to look down
He balanced on the cylindrical top
Narrow but firm for an awkward foot
Anchored on one worn out shoe 
Torn laces and large hole in the sole 
Held him in place against a rising wind
Not favoring him to win
As he watched his home burn down 
Neighbor’s lost theirs as well                      
He swayed from side to side from way up there
Concrete held the pole in place
Shoe laces simply dangled and so did he
Contemplating everything the eye could see
On the pole, firmly in his place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/26/2015 11:32:00 PM
Earl, i certainly like to be on such position.. AM scared of heights.. but i try to overcome this by joining training: high jumps, disaster training.. love the imagery the progressive intensity of feelings and the imagery!!!! a picturesque of a scene!!!~olive eloisa
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Date: 4/27/2015 9:59:00 AM
Hi Olive, It is nice to hear from you. Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. When I was young I used to walk on the roof tops of very tall buildings with high winds swirling all around me. I am no longer that person. It was fun back in the day. You are fine just the way you are Olive. Stay safe and sound on the ground. Have a great day. Earl
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