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Man and Boy Can and Can'T Fable

A FABLE FOLLOWS Seeing her son’s smile fade and his face turn to bother, A question she made, then asked, as his loving Mother. “Why is your face now laid with such a pouting slant?” Not scant was the answer he did grant, “Because I’m a can’t, Wanting to be a can, and can is what I can’t until I’m a man.” “I can’t reach the bathroom sink when I brush my teeth; I can’t open the cellar door to see what lies beneath; Big kids say I can’t play ball because I’m too small; Adults have such cool books, but I can’t read, just look; Adults say overly much, ‘don't touch, can’t touch, no to touch’; Carnival rides have tall lines my head can’t find for a long time; I can’t use Dad’s tools, not unless he’s there, it’s his rule; Cabinets and shelves can’t be reached by child-sized selves; and Better to be a child of elves, ‘cause, Mother, there’s much else, So many cant’s to rant that telling all, well, I just can’t!” The boy ran out the door with his pout larger than before. He broke many fallen sticks, he threw several red bricks, He kicked lots of rocks and he pulled strings on his socks. Arriving at the nearby park, he saw a man without a spark. The elderly man sat on a swing, not at all swinging and This same old man stared straight ahead, not at all blinking. The boy stood, thinking, then speaking, “You don’t seem fine.” The man spoke, "I'm old with no shine. I rage at my age. I've lost my smile. Joy would place on my face without stall if all the while I were a child, if I were just, again, boy-small."
... CayCay Jennings March 2, 2018

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Date: 3/12/2017 11:40:00 AM
My favorite, Cay Cay...Congratulations, read smooth as silk!!
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Date: 3/11/2017 10:12:00 PM
Hi CayCay, What a great fable. As finished reading I was reminded of the "circle of life." Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 3/11/2017 9:08:00 PM
Wonderful fable, CayCay, congratulations on your win ~* Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/6/2017 4:50:00 AM
You have created a wonderful Fable CayCay! I hope to see this one high on the winner's list! I have missed you. On to the next.....7 Hugs, Connie
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Date: 3/4/2017 11:54:00 AM
Oh CayCay, this is a wonderful fable, that rhyme, that story, lady, this is insanely good... 7 and fav
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Darren White
Date: 3/12/2017 9:05:00 AM
So well deserved placement :)
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/4/2017 11:58:00 AM
Your words bring me such joy that thank you seems inadequate, but with appreciation I do, indeed, thank you for warming a section of time for me! Hugs ... CayCay
Date: 3/3/2017 7:16:00 PM
wowowow, Caycay, this is FANTASTIC, lady!! I just thought to myself, let's see what Caycay has put up here lately. This better be a winner!!! SEVEN
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/4/2017 11:59:00 AM
How excited I get when you give me WOWs! I am infused with the enthusiasm you left in this box for me to find. Thank you and love you and, oh - ain't life grand! Hugs ... CayCay
Date: 3/2/2017 8:24:00 PM
Oh Cay Cay I love this, this is so sweet!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/4/2017 12:03:00 PM
You are such a delightful commenter, always a pleasure to be included in your reading and poetry reactions. All the best and hugs ... CayCay

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