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Since the day I was conceived, her delicate hands have held me. Since the day I was created, her hands floated my first endeavor. At the point when the tears started to rain, her hands covered me. She has made it a priority to facilitate protecting her treasure. She was ecstatic to curl and smooth my classic hair Sweep. Her hands sufficed, and my scars were concealed. She drew me closer to the star with her soft, steep. When I finally got her, she hugged me and, by God, she cheered. I'm glad that she wasn't hurting me when she was playing. She seldom uses her hands to form and twist trees. Her hands would embrace the focuses she was making, Presumably, I'm related to her and depending on her strands. Time has effectively weighed intensely on her side. The radical strive of lifting her hands spurs her soreness. I've never seen such a shocking model of heart inside. She is my initial stage where foments all my crudeness. Who taught Love that the most prized asset is the heart. An exquisite family has blessed us to call it our own. They remember us for who we are, not for what I've put in the cart. She enjoys being a mother regardless of our faults and groans.
ALL YOURS (Jun 15) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand Written; May 7, 2021

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Date: 5/8/2021 7:36:00 PM
Dear Lasaad, your expressive pen spills beautifully with appreciation and love. A Mom's instinct and pleasure is to protect and please her child, regardless of their "faults and groans". A deep and wondrous piece full of moving imagery. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/9/2021 2:21:00 AM
Dear Susan, glad to see you back, and thanks for your lovely and kind words; it means a lot to me, have a wonderful day, with warm hugs, love, and peace
Date: 5/8/2021 12:09:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this marvelous, elegant poem, and especially the last verse. Wonderful thoughts for Mother's Day. Blessings, my friend.
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Date: 5/8/2021 1:06:00 PM
Dear Evelyn, I Appreciate your thoughtful and kind words; I'm sure you realize when it comes to our moms, who painted for us that colorful rainbow when it's loaded up with broken dreams. Blessings dear friend
Date: 5/8/2021 8:13:00 AM
Such a lovely endearing piece Lasaad. painted with such loving colours of who a Mother truly is. Lovely imagery and insightfulness threads through this gem. Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 5/8/2021 1:02:00 PM
Dear Gordon, I Appreciate your thoughtful and kind words; I'm sure you realize when it comes to our moms, who painted the world a rainbow when it's loaded up with broken dreams but thank you to all Moms for making dreams come true
Date: 5/8/2021 3:06:00 AM
Mother: The incarnation of God's love in human form. Nothing could ever surpass the beauty, purity, and sacrifice of mother's love! Allegorically, mother earth, has all the characteristics of a mother! Superb poem that touches the heart of every man. Blessings my friend!
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Date: 5/8/2021 3:23:00 AM
Dear Demetrios, I Appreciate your thoughtful and kind words; I'm sure you realize when it comes to our moms, who painted the world a rainbow when it's loaded up with broken dreams but thank you to all Moms for making dreams come true.
Date: 5/8/2021 2:39:00 AM
God created Eve to be the mother of her children. I am sure she gave them good lessons. Pity man prefer to do what pleases him most rather than follow good advice. Clever poem.
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Date: 5/8/2021 3:24:00 AM
Dear Victor, I Appreciate your thoughtful and kind words; I'm sure you realize when it comes to our moms, who painted the world a rainbow when it's loaded up with broken dreams but thank you to all Moms for making dreams come true.
Date: 5/7/2021 12:31:00 PM
Beautiful poem Lasaad, Mother Nature, to our own mothers, nurturing and protecting us despite our faults and shortcomings, intensely deep and moving as with all your creations, I think kai will enjoy this one, best of luck in the contest, cheers David
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Date: 5/7/2021 1:13:00 PM
Dear David Appreciate your thoughtful words, and you realize when it's our moms, the individuals Who paint the world a rainbow when it's loaded up with broken dreams, but thank you, Mommy, most of all for making dreams come true.