Mama's Surprise Premiere Contest Winner

My mama's belly sticks out far!
I cannot see a passing car
     when walking with her on the street.
     I wonder what she had to eat?

I think she has a lot of gas,
for when we lay on the soft grass
     her tummy moves this way and that
     most every time I touch or pat.

And mama wears shirts like a tent
when we are home or where we went,
     because her buttons sometimes pop
     when we run fast or skip and hop.

My mama said, today I'm three
and has a secret to tell me!
     She put my hand on her big bump
     and soon I felt a tiny lump.

Said big surprise is very near,
a brand new baby for you dear!
     Its tiny foot was touching me
     and soon, big sister I would be!

I ran and jumped on big my bed
then grabbed my Teddy, by his head,
     and on my baby laid it there - 
     brought Teddy close for us to share!


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Premiere Contest: Three-Year-Old's Thoughts
Sponsor: Brenda Chiri 
Judged: 07/23/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/24/2017 4:32:00 PM
...and then comes the sibling rivalry.....congrats on the top spot Sandra
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Date: 7/24/2017 10:09:00 AM
Great write, Sandra. Well deserved winner!
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Date: 7/23/2017 9:18:00 PM
Great write, Sandra, congratulations on your win..~*
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Date: 7/23/2017 7:06:00 PM
Great perspective with this winner, Sandra. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/23/2017 5:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Sandra! Enjoyed this!
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Date: 7/23/2017 4:08:00 PM
Many congrats Sandra I knew this would place high the first time I read it:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/23/2017 2:24:00 PM
SO sweet--and so like a three-year-old! Congrats on your top win. Janice
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Date: 7/23/2017 12:14:00 PM
This is charming. Congrats on you 1st place win.
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Date: 6/28/2017 8:45:00 AM
Very sweet, Mrs Sandra. Children always want a sibling until that sibling arrives and then it's a different story:)
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Date: 6/27/2017 7:33:00 PM
So sweet Sandra.
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Date: 6/27/2017 5:37:00 PM
aww this is charming Sandra I can just imagine a child saying and doing these things especially sharing the teddy:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/27/2017 5:36:00 PM
So like a 3-year old. "And mama wears shirts like a tent when we are home or where we went". When my mother was pg with my sister, she made me a smock.
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