Premiere Contest WinnerMama's Surprise

My mama's belly sticks out far!
I cannot see a passing car
     when walking with her on the street.
     I wonder what she had to eat?

I think she has a lot of gas,
for when we lay on the soft grass
     her tummy moves this way and that
     most every time I touch or pat.

And mama wears shirts like a tent
when we are home or where we went,
     because her buttons sometimes pop
     when we run fast or skip and hop.

My mama said, today I'm three
and has a secret to tell me!
     She put my hand on her big bump
     and soon I felt a tiny lump.

Said big surprise is very near,
a brand new baby for you dear!
     Its tiny foot was touching me
     and soon, big sister I would be!

I ran and jumped on big my bed
then grabbed my Teddy, by his head,
     and on my baby laid it there - 
     brought Teddy close for us to share!


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Premiere Contest: Three-Year-Old's Thoughts
Sponsor: Brenda Chiri 
Judged: 07/23/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Lawless Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 4:32 PM
...and then comes the sibling rivalry.....congrats on the top spot Sandra
Cwiak Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 10:09 AM
Great write, Sandra. Well deserved winner!
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 9:18 PM
Great write, Sandra, congratulations on your win..~*
Lane Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 7:06 PM
Great perspective with this winner, Sandra. Congratulations!
Wood Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 5:42 PM
Congratulations on your win Sandra! Enjoyed this!
Allison Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 4:08 PM
Many congrats Sandra I knew this would place high the first time I read it:-) hugs Jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 2:24 PM
SO sweet--and so like a three-year-old! Congrats on your top win. Janice
Cozart Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 12:14 PM
This is charming. Congrats on you 1st place win.
Turner Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Very sweet, Mrs Sandra. Children always want a sibling until that sibling arrives and then it's a different story:)
Smith Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 7:33 PM
So sweet Sandra.
Allison Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 5:37 PM
aww this is charming Sandra I can just imagine a child saying and doing these things especially sharing the teddy:-) hugs jan xx
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June 27, 2017 at 5:36 PM
So like a 3-year old. "And mama wears shirts like a tent when we are home or where we went". When my mother was pg with my sister, she made me a smock.
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