MAMAs AT THE SHORE

They call it pancake ice.
Flipping our minds.
Imagine the river
as maple syrup.
Mama’s at the shore
in an old-fashioned apron,
smiling, waiting
to see if we feast
on all the pancakes.
That is when we know
it is Spring, and
I see her again
dressed to the nines.
I can reach out
and talk to her
and we can talk
of days gone by,
like when Dad cried
for months at a time.
He comes to her
in the pancake boat.
Dad says her lips
taste like maple syrup
…and forever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Legros Kelley Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 12:05 AM
This is so precious Kim. A beautiful poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 5:26 PM
I appreciate you, Bj! I heard about a phenomenon of pancake ice and ran with it…
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January 3, 2024 at 12:54 PM
This is really deep Kim.. I love The use of "pancake ice" as a metaphor it's clever and evocative. It serves as a unique lens through which your pen explores memories. The river as "maple syrup" adds another layer, creating a vivid image that connects nature with familial experiences. The imagery of Mama in an old-fashioned apron and the anticipation of a feast further enriches the scene... The themes of loss, remembrance, and the enduring nature of love are delicately woven into the narrative..
Rodrigues Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 2:17 PM
Thank you so much, Silent! This one holds sentiment for me. In April Mom will be gone 3 years. Have a blessed day.
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January 3, 2024 at 12:55 PM
The imagery of tasting maple syrup "and forever" captures a sense of eternal connection and love... loved this one..
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