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MAMAs AT THE SHORE

They call it pancake ice. Flipping our minds. Imagine the river as maple syrup. Mama’s at the shore in an old-fashioned apron, smiling, waiting to see if we feast on all the pancakes. That is when we know it is Spring, and I see her again dressed to the nines. I can reach out and talk to her and we can talk of days gone by, like when Dad cried for months at a time. He comes to her in the pancake boat. Dad says her lips taste like maple syrup …and forever.

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Date: 1/6/2024 12:05:00 AM
This is so precious Kim. A beautiful poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/7/2024 5:26:00 PM
I appreciate you, Bj! I heard about a phenomenon of pancake ice and ran with it…
Date: 1/3/2024 12:54:00 PM
This is really deep Kim.. I love The use of "pancake ice" as a metaphor it's clever and evocative. It serves as a unique lens through which your pen explores memories. The river as "maple syrup" adds another layer, creating a vivid image that connects nature with familial experiences. The imagery of Mama in an old-fashioned apron and the anticipation of a feast further enriches the scene... The themes of loss, remembrance, and the enduring nature of love are delicately woven into the narrative..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/3/2024 2:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Silent! This one holds sentiment for me. In April Mom will be gone 3 years. Have a blessed day.
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Silent One
Date: 1/3/2024 12:55:00 PM
The imagery of tasting maple syrup "and forever" captures a sense of eternal connection and love... loved this one..

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