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Daddy tells me you always watch over me from the shimmering moon, ……….yet it seems so far! But my dear Mama, I'm going to pull down that bright sliver crescent moon and bring you back, just because I love you so much…oh so much. Will we ever play together again, ma? We will chase each other over the lush lawn, Go to the swing that hangs on the sturdy oak, Play hide and seek among flowering bushes. All will be happiness, only you'd come down And leave the wan moon alone to mind its own.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 2/3/2022 12:38:00 AM
The childish whim of a little one who is missing his mom and dad, is touchingly portrayed !
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Date: 1/26/2021 2:47:00 PM
A lovely poem, Victor :)
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Date: 1/26/2021 11:14:00 AM
Moonbeams of Mama's love shining down, Lovely write Victor
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Date: 1/26/2021 6:54:00 AM
The yearning heart of a child for it's mother. It is always so. Great and poignant write Victor. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/25/2021 9:00:00 PM
Victor, Nothing under the sky in moon that knows you as well. Mama's grace in light. -Richard
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Date: 1/25/2021 4:41:00 PM
So sweet, Victor! A yearning for a grown man to once again be a child and run with his mama. Touches my heart because I love running and playing with the grands and well remember being with my kids too :)
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Date: 1/25/2021 1:58:00 PM
Adorable poem, Victor. You are eclectic that is for sure.
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Date: 1/25/2021 10:30:00 AM
Beautiful and heartfelt thoughts from a child's sweet perspective. So well written. :)
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Date: 1/25/2021 9:00:00 AM
A heartfelt voice through the eyes of a child, well written Victor. Tom
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Date: 1/25/2021 8:01:00 AM
A great heartfelt poem in the view of a child, Victor, I love it. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/25/2021 7:53:00 AM
Lovely...but when she gets older...there'll be little time for Mama.
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Date: 1/25/2021 7:37:00 AM
- A poem that gives sad feelings, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/25/2021 6:15:00 AM
Hi Victor, You have penned a well-written and sad write. The dialogue of the precious young child was so endearing and heartfelt. Well done. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/25/2021 5:37:00 AM
Beautifully poignant, emotive verses. Your poem gives voice to a tender young mind brilliantly, Victor.
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Date: 1/25/2021 2:22:00 AM
So sad... God bless you with love and prayers dear Victor.
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Date: 1/25/2021 12:44:00 AM
heartfelt; superb writings
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