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Malt Shop

MALT SHOP I’d been in the place - The usual booths lots of them And a soda fountain – But not right after school Not that I’m such a flaming intellectual But the bookish didn’t hang out there And then Some of us had jobs No It was the personality boys and girls For whom school was a prelude to the malt shop Here you could be seen and heard Heard over the noise you were part of The nerd need not show up at the malt shop The booths were both confessional and possessional With room for four two boys two girls Nerdy had no girl no room for him I suppose every school has a no touch clan Four or five royalty who really know how to play They will not inhabit the malt shop It’s too common for them So where did I fit in? I didn’t Didn’t go to dances Didn’t know how to smile just right Did I want to go to the malt shop Smile laugh Flirt with the girls? Of course I did! Dave Austin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/27/2015 12:10:00 AM
I think everyone can relate to this, always wanting to fit in with the cool kids... I really enjoyed reading this nostalgic poem tonight. Very well written, Daver!
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Date: 9/21/2015 2:38:00 PM
oh wow, how did I miss this one? Daver, you are so right. Neighborhood type poems speak volumes on how we were raised and how we learned to see the world. We did not have a malt shop. It was just common knowledge who the popular kids were and I probably got categorized as a "smart girl" who was bookish . I guess I had a sort of niche among my friends. Great nostalgia here.
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Daver Austin
Date: 9/22/2015 11:07:00 AM
Thanks old buddy. Hey and the malt shop or drug store always had a marvelous soda fountain with a gal or guy wearing a white hat could mix up some marvelous creations for kids. Love, daver

Book: Shattered Sighs