Malt Shop

MALT SHOP

I’d been in the place -
The usual booths    lots of them
And a soda fountain –
But not right after school

Not that I’m such a flaming intellectual
But the bookish didn’t hang out there
And then
Some of us had jobs

No    It was the personality boys and girls
For whom school was a prelude to the malt shop
Here you could be seen and heard
Heard over the noise you were part of

The nerd need not show up at the malt shop
The booths were both confessional and
      possessional
With room for four    two boys    two girls
Nerdy had no girl    no room for him

I suppose every school has a no touch clan
Four or five royalty who really know how to
       play
They will not inhabit the malt shop
It’s too common for them

So    where did I fit in?
I didn’t
Didn’t go to dances
Didn’t know how to smile just right

Did I want to go to the malt shop
Smile    laugh
Flirt with the girls?
Of course I did!

Dave Austin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/27/2015 12:10:00 AM
I think everyone can relate to this, always wanting to fit in with the cool kids... I really enjoyed reading this nostalgic poem tonight. Very well written, Daver!
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Date: 9/21/2015 2:38:00 PM
oh wow, how did I miss this one? Daver, you are so right. Neighborhood type poems speak volumes on how we were raised and how we learned to see the world. We did not have a malt shop. It was just common knowledge who the popular kids were and I probably got categorized as a "smart girl" who was bookish . I guess I had a sort of niche among my friends. Great nostalgia here.
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Daver Austin
Date: 9/22/2015 11:07:00 AM
Thanks old buddy. Hey and the malt shop or drug store always had a marvelous soda fountain with a gal or guy wearing a white hat could mix up some marvelous creations for kids. Love, daver
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