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Maladjusted

When the sh*t hits the fan and the plates hit the walls And Mummy’s voice screeches, “You ain’t got the balls” The sound of wood splintering leaves kids with hunches That once again Daddy ain’t pulling his punches At least it was wood this time - unlike before When what Daddy fractured was not just a door And Daddy’s voice shouts, ‘I work all that I’m able but when I come home, I want food on the table!” Upstairs, the children cannot speak their fears Three kids on their beds with their hands on their ears While five year old Lucy is wiping her tears And Tommy chants ‘La La’ to drown what he hears But ten year old Gerry, wise, for a young lad Has a best friend with a Saturday Dad He seems to get by, and he states with a sigh “I get to go places… and Mum doesn’t cry.” With siblings sent ‘up’ with no food in their tummy Because Daddy had to, “Have words with your Mummy.” Gerry, would get them the food they were lacking He wasn’t surprised to find Daddy was packing He’d taken a chance when the rows turned to silence Which had to be better than out and out violence Daddy said, “Don’t creep about like a mouse… from now on, Son… you are the man of the house.” Lucy was young and she idolised Dad Tommy was older and, for a while, bad But Gerry now charged with his own father’s plan At just ten years old… became a young man And with Daddy gone to a town far away Gerry stayed home till his mum had gone grey But one day she had a new man on her hand And Gerry was happy to make his own stand Twas eighteen months later this very deep thinker Let a girl get to him, hook, line and sinker He hugged her and kissed her the day she miscarried Yet he and the woman he loved… never married

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 11/24/2023 11:24:00 AM
oh, a sad poem, inspirational and riveting. I find toxic families create such abysmal environments with strange outcomes. This poem spoke to my heart...thanks for sharing, Sara
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/27/2023 4:04:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. Strangely, the couple I had in mind when I wrote this, became great friends - including ‘his’ new wife. All three kids did okay for themselves too. Terry
Date: 11/24/2023 11:20:00 AM
So sad but it does happen, it’s a shame that Gerry was put off being married. An inspirational write Terry… Belle
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/27/2023 4:02:00 PM
Glad you ‘enjoyed’, Belle. Terry
Date: 11/23/2023 10:52:00 PM
You've got to count your blessings sometimes Terry. There's always someone worse off than you. You often hear stories like this, families living in a toxic environment. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/27/2023 7:22:00 PM
Whoa. This could be the ultimate proof of the Theory of Evolution, Terry. ~ D. R. Wynne
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/27/2023 4:00:00 PM
Thanks, Tom. This started life as an entry for Matt’s DIVORCE contest. It evolved into this. Will probably still post the original at some point. Didn’t want two ‘miserable’ poems close together…. I got me a reputation to uphold ;-)
Date: 11/23/2023 5:21:00 PM
Sad but too real. Hard to win a game that has no rules. A well written poem about real life. Nice job. Terry:)
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/23/2023 5:27:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel. Not autobiographical, but with elements close to home, I did get a little something in my eye… not a tear, you understand, just one of those ‘noseeums’ ;-)
Date: 11/23/2023 5:15:00 PM
Such a fantastic telling of a tragic story. Your rhyme scheme and flow are magnificent. Nicely done my friend.
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/23/2023 5:21:00 PM
Thank you, Jerry. Once in a while, I find the ‘mindset’ to write something deeper than ‘Ha ha’ . I’m so pleased you got this and am delighted at your approval. Terry

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