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Malabar Trogon

*Malabar Trogon is listed in Indian Birds-of-Paradise
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Blue eye shadow, blue beak, black innocent eyes - bleak
Chestnut back with designed grey gown and tail ~ misspeaks
He with a white necklace, she a smooth ochred chested
Silent birds still in bare forests at God's behest

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I Am Anaya November 2, 2024 at 8:42 PM Congratulations on your win, Threvini! Beautiful birds~ thriveni c mysore November 2, 2024 at 8:56 PM Thank you dear friend for your pleasant visit. Thank you for the happy words. Blessings & cheers.

Kim Rodrigues November 2, 2024 at 7:41 AM Gorgeous! Congrat, Thriveni! thriveni c mysore November 2, 2024 at 8:56 PM Thank you dear poet for your kind visit and happy words. Blessings & cheers.

Suzette Richards November 2, 2024 at 1:23 AM Congratulations on your 4th place win, Thriveni. It was interesting to learn about the Malabar Trogon. The trailing rhyme (chested/behest) was perfectly executed. (Yes, ‘chested’ is the adjective of ‘chest’.) See my soup mail for details to claim your prize. thriveni c mysore November 2, 2024 at 3:33 AM I am so honored. I am grateful to you for your kind placement and contest. Thank you dear poet. Thank you for this day's happiness. Blessings & cheers.

David Crandall October 14, 2024 at 10:32 AM Nice description Thriveni. I just found a nice Youtube on the Malabar Trogan. They're a beautiful bird. thriveni c mysore October 14, 2024 at 11:13 PM I am glad you checked on the beauty. Thank you for your kind visit dear poet friend. I appreciate your support. Blessings & cheers.

Len Gasun October 13, 2024 at 11:24 PM Fascinating image my dear poet friend. i like birds and thanks a lot for introducing this one. Thanks for this precious share. Blessings to you always. Hugs thriveni c mysore October 14, 2024 at 11:11 PM Such a pleasant visit dear poet friend. Thank you for your kind words. I am grateful for your blessings. Cheers.

Mystic Rose Rose October 13, 2024 at 5:19 PM absolutely exquisite poetry dear Thriveni, thriveni c mysore October 13, 2024 at 5:51 PM Thank you dear poet for your kind visit. You are a bird lover, howz your pet Charlie. I am grateful for your precious time dear friend,am glad you liked it. Cheers.

Karen Jones October 13, 2024 at 12:46 AM You do a great job making this bird come to life visually! thriveni c mysore October 13, 2024 at 12:51 AM Ah thank you for your sweet visit and words dear poet. It is a beautiful elusive silent bird. Glad you liked it. Cheers.

Maria Williams October 12, 2024 at 10:16 PM I love watching birds Thrivein, in such a few lines your have painted an accurate picture and brought it to life . I gather you are from Mysore. Keep writing - Maria thriveni c mysore October 13, 2024 at 12:26 AM I am so glad you like bird watching dear poet. Malabar Trogan is elusive and silent bird. It hurts to see even such gentle lives being pushed over due to lack of forest cover. Thank you for your kind words, Yes I am from Mysore, SouthIndia. Thank you Cheers.

Kim Rodrigues October 12, 2024 at 8:20 PM Lovely colors and imagery! thriveni c mysore October 13, 2024 at 12:23 AM I am grateful for your precious time and kind visit dear poet. I am glad you like the bird. Thank you. Cheers.

John Read October 12, 2024 at 11:00 AM Your description surely brings it to life, thriveni c mysore October 13, 2024 at 12:22 AM Your pleasant visit is joy for me dear poet. Thank you for your kind words. Cheers.

Joseph May October 12, 2024 at 6:13 AM Nicely penned, a beautiful bird thriveni c mysore October 13, 2024 at 12:20 AM Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. Your words means so much to me. I am grateful for your precious time. Cheers.