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Making Waves

A Mystic brewed a love potion
That made men come in the ocean
Although it was quaint
Bikini girls faint
At the sight of loco motion!

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Anne E Sangster - K

September 10, 2022 at 6:06 AM

So the sight of loco motion makes bikini girls faint eh? Lol

Linda Alice Fowler

September 8, 2022 at 1:08 PM

I bet you make a lot of waves Rico! Linda

Valsa George

September 8, 2022 at 1:49 AM

You juggle with words Rico .....and each time they come down with a different meaning...! That's your magic!

Rico Leffanta

September 8, 2022 at 10:54 AM

I just write the words and let readers decide what they might mean, but thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha!

Tom Cunningham

September 8, 2022 at 12:28 AM

So that's where the surf comes from lol. Tom

Rico Leffanta

September 8, 2022 at 10:53 AM

That is why surfers duck UNDER the wave! Aloha!

Mystic Rose Rose

September 7, 2022 at 3:04 PM

DO THE LOCOMOTION WITH ME, remember that song Rico, cool poetry like it

Rico Leffanta

September 8, 2022 at 10:51 AM

In 1962, I lived in Paris, and listened to Edith Piaf singing, Les Feuilles Mortes. Now I live in Hawai'i, where the common breakfast is Loco Moco! Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha!