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Making Waves

A Mystic brewed a love potion That made men come in the ocean Although it was quaint Bikini girls faint At the sight of loco motion!

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Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 9/10/2022 6:06:00 AM

So the sight of loco motion makes bikini girls faint eh? Lol

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/8/2022 1:08:00 PM

I bet you make a lot of waves Rico! Linda

Valsa George

Date: 9/8/2022 1:49:00 AM

You juggle with words Rico .....and each time they come down with a different meaning...! That's your magic!

Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/8/2022 10:54:00 AM

I just write the words and let readers decide what they might mean, but thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/8/2022 12:28:00 AM

So that's where the surf comes from lol. Tom

Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/8/2022 10:53:00 AM

That is why surfers duck UNDER the wave! Aloha!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/7/2022 3:04:00 PM

DO THE LOCOMOTION WITH ME, remember that song Rico, cool poetry like it

Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/8/2022 10:51:00 AM

In 1962, I lived in Paris, and listened to Edith Piaf singing, Les Feuilles Mortes. Now I live in Hawai'i, where the common breakfast is Loco Moco! Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/7/2022 1:52:00 PM

Interesting work you have penned in this one. Way to go. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page and taking time to comment. Sara

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/7/2022 11:39:00 AM

i love how you sneak in those words with double meanings, rico!

Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/8/2022 10:52:00 AM

Would that I could write them as well as you! Aloha!