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Making Love

Let me know your smells taste of them well, hold your sweat filling mind. Limbs growing heavy as hot flames flick flesh ready to meet flesh. And then, to smolder resting in awe in the sweat of weight heavy. Intoxicating eclipse of joy blends fire melting ice.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/5/2009 10:53:00 AM
I blush! I'm too young for this kind of stuff, my mom will be unhappy if she catches me reading this kind of steamy literature. Just a request, Sue: please try writing about more innocent stuff, don't poison innocent minds like mine. Regards, Fred (Now where's those Playboy and Penthouse magazines that I was peeping at just a while ago???!!!) LOL
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