Jared Pickett Poet Acrostic

Making Love

Measuring tempo i spin you
Around, i
Kiss you up and then down your back, hearing
Incredible moans of pleasure and delight. your
Nails rip at my skin, climaxing. your 
Grip becomes tighter around my waist

Lyrics pour from your mouth. an
Opera. the melody pure and intoxicating. this
Version of you, a picture perfect moment of
Erotic and passionate Love Making...


........:JP)

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Brandee Augustus September 2, 2009 at 2:28 PM Geez! Wow, dude that's awesome! Please tell me that this was written for someone in your life. That's a great acrostic.

Ashe Kristy De La Keur Scoville July 21, 2009 at 6:09 PM It is exquisite...to be able to find that again..

Sabrina Huggins July 21, 2009 at 8:56 AM This is gorgeous!! Its an perfectly painted picture! Well done! Your one of my fave poets on here....Sabrina

Izzy Gumbo July 19, 2009 at 10:08 AM Well done! Beautiful, sensual and such a worthy Acrostic!

Nicole Sharon Brown July 18, 2009 at 5:56 AM i agree with all of the other comments! this is hot!

Sara Kendrick July 18, 2009 at 1:23 AM Interesting Acrostic,Jared. Interesting mate you have there,also. Keep writing. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire July 17, 2009 at 8:05 PM This is molten hot with passion, Jared! I'll have to ask you to join the list of poets here who are sharing the tab for my cold showers. Awesome write! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser July 17, 2009 at 1:37 PM Hot! Hot! write Jared, written with warmth and feeling>>James

Charmaine Chircop July 17, 2009 at 6:53 AM pasionata-passionate acrostic--charma

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire July 16, 2009 at 7:49 AM Dear Jared, Excellent, spicy hot Acrostic very well done Thznk-YOU for YOUR Gracious comment on "Pearly Gates" Fhe contest isn't over yet YOU should try it If YOU do Good Luck I'll be reading more of YOU soon ALWAYS ...HG

Constance La France July 15, 2009 at 4:00 PM hot, hot... and yep .. very erotic... and thanks for your comment on my poem.. Constance