Making A Point

Invents and vision 
filter thoughts from within and
then being without,
going from point 'A' to point 'B'
then think and see, What's the point?

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Darlene De Beaulieu

August 19, 2024 at 2:50 PM

Hello Poet, I do not think many would get the answer to :What is the point. aloha! Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 20, 2024 at 10:04 AM

Hello Hilo Poet, Thank you for explaining this to me. I am understanding this now. Aloha! /Darlene/

William Kelii Kekaula

August 19, 2024 at 4:56 PM

Aloha Darlene, thoughts starts within but without ex.: points, or maybe, what should I cook for dinner--'without', a family starves. A person thinking of points earlier will answer, later as life goes on. Points, they have no answer for points--only about life that went on.