Making A Point

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Poetic Form: Tanka

Inspired: 2024 August 19

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Invents and vision filter thoughts from within and then being without, going from point 'A' to point 'B' then think and see, What's the point?

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/19/2024 2:50:00 PM

Hello Poet, I do not think many would get the answer to :What is the point. aloha! Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/20/2024 10:04:00 AM

Hello Hilo Poet, Thank you for explaining this to me. I am understanding this now. Aloha! /Darlene/

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/19/2024 4:56:00 PM

Aloha Darlene, thoughts starts within but without ex.: points, or maybe, what should I cook for dinner--'without', a family starves. A person thinking of points earlier will answer, later as life goes on. Points, they have no answer for points--only about life that went on.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/19/2024 10:01:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun write. Many ask, What's the point? The answer may never come..... Have a wonderful day writing away.........

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/19/2024 10:07:00 AM

Yes, I'm awake now still on Hawaii time and will enjoy the day Paula. Aloha William