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Makin It

people ask me how im doin my response always the same man im barely makin it cause this world is only pain i look around expectin to find what makes me sane but the reason isnt plane its not the fact the world it self is always pullin me down or that i shed a tear when a rose hits the ground i love her with a passion one that can not be faded its harder than you think to describe yourself being jaded fall for her till my heart is again sore yet in the back of my mind i wonder if there is more shes everythin ive asked for-all my hopes and dreams completely but the weight she holds is only used to beat me fight back when your on the floor cold and bleedin out cause its then that you will learn what youve done your stronger than the love you think is real you can live without the pressure its hard enough to deal with the battle you face alone love with never help how you feel you know i guess it makes since that the one thing designed to save us ends up only prematurely engravin us in broken trust when smiles turn to tears and tears become dust its makes me wonder whatll become of love it wont be long till the world sees that this love is just disease meant to bring the end to you and me and they will plead for what they thought was right stain thier pillows with tears through the night cry beacuse they know they were wrong and it was all just because they saw fight back when your on the floor cold and bleedin out cause its then you see what you lack your stronger than the love you think is real you can live without the pressure its hard enough to deal with the battle you face alone love with never help how you feel its just a dream a haze cause i lived my life in a daze of everything they said was true only to find that no one knew love is one of those things you cant touch and yet it somehow makes it enough but ya see you cant touch what doesnt exist thats why im takin it off the emotions list cause that walked out the door with you feelings now makin my life only blue listen carefully when this beat no longer sounds pull the knife out of my back when i turn around fight back when your on the floor cold and bleedin out cause its then youll see there was always doubt your stronger than the love you think is real you can live without the pressure youve tried to reveal with the battle you face alone love with never help how you feel thats why im just barely makin it untill the world sees that love is the lie to which we are all appealed

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Date: 6/2/2011 8:37:00 PM
Harsh; you made your point. Keep writing. I enjoyed the poem.
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