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Makers Upon Makers

On swings the pendulum after countless ticks and tocks 
Singing the glorious requiem for its dying brethren clocks 
It taps the world with waning tempo to preach evanescence 
Yet its past and streaming photons mark a boundless presence 

An image between ticks engraves where dust is in the wind 
Recording life's ebb, whether birth of son or loss of friend 
Rarely does their maker know the many ticks or tocks he's started 
Especially not those loathesome tocks that sent away departed
 
What of our designer who willed us many ticks ago 
Might he know the meager wisps of the souls he set aglow? 
How should the righteous consume for production of one's self 
To make their mass of matter get placed higher on lord's shelf? 

Maybe life isn't just some programmed stellar robot 
And infinite skies get dotted with cosmic rounds of buckshot 
Then we make our own demise or shining place of glory 
And the only truth that reality sets is our untold story 

It makes morals a reprimand of actions that hurt the whole 
And spoon-fed to children with threats of their eternal soul 
Maybe a priest is another maker, sated by ancestral tricks
Just as the lonely man who fills his silent halls with ticks

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/2/2011 3:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Chance. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:36:00 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Chance
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Date: 6/27/2011 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations on this powerful poem being featured this week. You have wonderful, seamless rhymes here and deep thoughts. "Untold story" really spoke to me, as well as the ending!
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Date: 6/27/2011 5:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your well written poetry being featured this week Chance. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/27/2011 4:27:00 AM
Congrats Chance on your featured poem this week on PS.. an amazing piece to share with us all with luv..
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Date: 2/5/2011 11:06:00 AM
You have decent descriptiveness and rhyming in this offering. Good output.
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