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Make the Wait Poetic

I went out for a walk in the evening Kept my pace with the sinking silent sun My wife called she went for a brief shopping And would be back home before I return. I came back in my own time not so quick Found the door locked for she hadn’t returned Held hostage on the road by the traffic Made me realize how our times’ wheel turned. I sat tired on the dark steps of the door Searched the memory when this happened last Finding none I told mind already sore Think a sonnet on things that happen first. Locked out by modernity chaotic My mind tried to make the wait poetic.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/28/2017 1:28:00 PM
I was delighted to see your work in my winners’ list..I enjoyed reading the work of an outstanding poet..Your participation was much appreciated..Sara
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/29/2017 1:51:00 AM
Thank you, Sara so much. It was a pleasure indeed to participate in your contest.
Date: 9/28/2017 7:44:00 AM
A patient person. Take each step life in stride. I like your view of the world.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/28/2017 8:57:00 AM
Thank you, James for liking the poem.
Date: 9/27/2017 4:59:00 PM
Subimal, I bet you were kicking yourself for not having a key, but good idea to use the time to make up a poem, congratulations on your win !
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/28/2017 8:55:00 AM
Thank you, BW. Poem bugs always bite.
Date: 9/27/2017 4:29:00 PM
I can just picture the scene Subimal! :-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/28/2017 8:54:00 AM
Thank you, Jan for liking the picture.
Date: 8/19/2017 8:27:00 AM
Truly poetic wait this is!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/21/2017 10:50:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/21/2017 10:50:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay.

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