Make the Wait Poetic

I went out for a walk in the evening
Kept my pace with the sinking silent sun
My wife called she went for a brief shopping
And would be back home before I return.

I came back in my own time not so quick
Found the door locked for she hadn’t returned
Held hostage on the road by the traffic
Made me realize how our times’ wheel turned.

I sat tired on the dark steps of the door
Searched the memory when this happened last
Finding none I told mind already sore
Think a sonnet on things that happen first.

Locked out by modernity chaotic
My mind tried to make the wait poetic.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 1:28 PM
I was delighted to see your work in my winners’ list..I enjoyed reading the work of an outstanding poet..Your participation was much appreciated..Sara
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 1:51 AM
Thank you, Sara so much. It was a pleasure indeed to participate in your contest.
Inman Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 7:44 AM
A patient person. Take each step life in stride. I like your view of the world.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 8:57 AM
Thank you, James for liking the poem.
La France Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 4:59 PM
Subimal, I bet you were kicking yourself for not having a key, but good idea to use the time to make up a poem, congratulations on your win !
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 8:55 AM
Thank you, BW. Poem bugs always bite.
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 4:29 PM
I can just picture the scene Subimal! :-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 8:54 AM
Thank you, Jan for liking the picture.
Pandit Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 8:27 AM
Truly poetic wait this is!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 10:50 PM
Thank you, Vijay.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 10:50 PM
Thank you, Vijay.
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