Make Me Done

Threatening clouds above
Send in lightning of love
I rove through raindrops of fall
Overall, I’m feeling my way through trees so tall
The air is dissipating the despair in my heart
All along, you tried to fix my heart as it broke apart
Sorry I let you down and you frowned the moment I moved on
Make me done before dawn, after dusk after we welcome the sun

Dreaming of you oh so wildly, baby
Musing about the old days in the gracious sunshine
Dancing in the wind oh so beautifully
I’ll make it out alive, darling dear — I’ll be just fine

Heal away our wounds of the past
Make me done
The scars that are oh so vast in our lives
I’ll be moving on
Peel away the sorrow
Move away from my sun
There is tomorrow
To look upon, to look upon
Let happiness last and cast away disgrace
Your words are vague and I can’t keep pace with my heart beat beating 
Bearing the thought of losing you on the daily
Waiting till peace arrives…
Make me done
For I’m arriving undone
While I run, run
I’m arriving undone
Having our fun
My battle’s left unwon…
While you are gone
Don’t be a son-of-a-gun
Don’t be sad and mad, hon

I can’t face the unfathomable and the impossible without God nearby
Abide by my side, Holy Spirit, and don’t ask why, 
For I relied on Your reply
I cried for Your serenity

Dreaming of you oh so wildly, baby
Musing about the old days in the gracious sunshine
Dancing in the wind oh so beautifully
I’ll make it out alive, darling dear — I’ll be just fine

Heal away our wounds of the past
Make me done, done
The scars that are oh so vast in our lives
Fake it till we have fun
Peel away the sorrow
Remember to smile
There is tomorrow
Run the extra mile
Let happiness last and cast away disgrace
Your words are vague and I can’t keep pace with my heart beat beating 
Bearing the thought of losing you on the daily
Waiting till peace arrives…
Make me done, done
For I’m arriving undone
Love, alone, grows on
I’m arriving undone
So should you…
My battle’s left unwon…
And that is true
Don’t be a son-of-a-gun
You’ve had your fun…your fun…
So don’t say sorry…you were my everything…
For the wrong you’ve done
You threw frost against my fire, my bittersweet darling
I long to belong in the sun

Shocked to say the least
I don’t know why I feel like dying
Constantly yearning for my sins to be as far as west to east
I don’t know why you are crying…
But I won’t ask why anymore
You’re the one I adore
But our change is a challenging chore
All the more…
All the more…

Dreaming of you oh so wildly, baby
Musing about the old days in the gracious sunshine
Dancing in the wind oh so beautifully
I’ll make it out alive, darling dear — I’ll be just fine

Heal away our wounds of the past
Make me done, done
The scars that are oh so vast in our lives
There’s plenty of sun
So, peel away the sorrow
So, look upon, upon
Another sunlit tomorrow
Let happiness last and cast away disgrace
Your words are vague and I can’t keep pace with my heart beat beating 
Bearing the thought of losing you on the daily
Waiting till peace arrives…
Believe and be brave, for I’ll be away
For I’m arriving undone
Save your thoughtless for another day
I’m arriving undone
I’m like a swaying, sparkling sea
My battle’s left unwon…
My lonely heart was yours possibly
Don’t be a son-of-a-gun
Instead, welcome the sun

Save me, I’m growing undone
I’m drowning in my tears on the run
My horrid fears weigh a ton
We welcome the sun, we welcome the sun
Left arriving undone in your arms of love
You never did me harm, oh Lord
Direct me to Your river of adoring above
You will forever be my accord

Heal away our wounds of the past
Make me done, sick of being desperation
The scars that are oh so vast in our lives
Don’t make fun of my disgraceful frustration
Peel away the sorrow
Love away the hate
There is tomorrow
Been jaded as of late
Tomorrow is just a rain shower away
Tomorrow is a day away, some say
Someday…someday…I pray away your anger and pain
Sometimes, I had to feel away your dismaying rain

You shunned me out amongst the dark
You plant a grave in me in this park
Embark upon me freedom
Give me His Kingdom, Kingdom
Don’t leave me feeling numb…
Numb, numb, numb in the cranium

Make me done
Take me home
On the run
Is where I roam
Make your leave
You had your fun
I won’t grieve
Like you, son-of-a-gun
I will receive
Gratification from on high
I choose to relieve
My spiralling-sad heart of nigh
Make me done
You are no longer my hon
Be gone…
I’ll be moving on

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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