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WRITTEN FROM A MARRIED WOMAN'S PERSPECTIVE

i know we have been married a very very long time we barely ever talk in fact i might as well be a mime it is normal i suppose after so long to lose interest please understand i am not at all trying to be a pest i wonder if you even still  know where it is just below my belly button you'll see the frizz  i wish - though it's been ages - you would find again that old space and then Make Love To Me In (what for you is) That Ancient Place
 

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Date: 11/4/2014 7:19:00 AM
*Laugh* This is a fun piece Maurice. Well put together. Regards "B"
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Date: 10/31/2014 1:19:00 PM
This is so humorous and cute Maurice. Years do tend to cool down the romance but the love is stronger than ever! I enjoyed your entry very much!
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Date: 10/31/2014 10:02:00 AM
- Enjoy with a smile on my mouth :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/31/2014 9:55:00 AM
That is the funniest bone of all! For some it is the impossible task of raising the dead. *lol* I see you are offering some stiff competition.
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Date: 10/31/2014 6:43:00 AM
Maurice :) I didnt know you have some funny bones there.. :D hahahaha
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Date: 10/30/2014 9:20:00 PM
hahahaha. this made me laugh out loud!! FAVE for sure.
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Date: 10/30/2014 9:20:00 PM
WHY NOT in the contest??? (Just saw what you said to Jan down here) I repeat, this is GREAT humor.
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Date: 10/30/2014 7:54:00 PM
Ut oh some dis-content here, and since I am of an age I understand. You need to know there is more than one place that is erotic ;) and use those LOL. BIG HUgs Light & Love
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Date: 10/30/2014 5:43:00 PM
Funny!
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Date: 10/30/2014 5:19:00 PM
smiling excellent pen maurice
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Date: 10/30/2014 4:21:00 PM
You have me chuckling with witty poem Maurice, love it, James :)
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Date: 10/30/2014 3:35:00 PM
haha...love it Maurice.....now go straighten out that leaning tower !!!
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Date: 10/30/2014 1:40:00 PM
Hilarious Maurice :-) i hope this does well for you in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/30/2014 5:19:00 PM
Oh Maurice you simply should put it in the contest - humour is so so lacking around here at times - go on you look at the positive comments you have received - you have brightened all our days with your hilarious write:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/30/2014 4:40:00 PM
not entering this in the contest Jan, so many people here having problems, I thought I would try to cheer people up.
Date: 10/30/2014 12:59:00 PM
Hi Maurice, Funny after the years we're put on the old fire place, until it re-kindles. great stuff. Lol Kevin
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Date: 10/30/2014 12:39:00 PM
hahaha that is freakin' funny.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/30/2014 6:42:00 PM
thanks Cas,