Maurice Yvonne Poet Couplet

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Make Love To Me In That Ancient Place

WRITTEN FROM A MARRIED WOMAN'S PERSPECTIVE

i know we have been married a very very long time
we barely ever talk in fact i might as well be a mime

it is normal i suppose after so long to lose interest
please understand i am not at all trying to be a pest

i wonder if you even still  know where it is
just below my belly button you'll see the frizz 

i wish - though it's been ages - you would find again that old space
and then Make Love To Me In (what for you is) That Ancient Place

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BE Bailey November 4, 2014 at 7:19 AM *Laugh* This is a fun piece Maurice. Well put together. Regards "B"

Connie Marcum Wong October 31, 2014 at 1:19 PM This is so humorous and cute Maurice. Years do tend to cool down the romance but the love is stronger than ever! I enjoyed your entry very much!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2014 at 10:02 AM - Enjoy with a smile on my mouth :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux October 31, 2014 at 9:55 AM That is the funniest bone of all! For some it is the impossible task of raising the dead. *lol* I see you are offering some stiff competition.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 31, 2014 at 6:43 AM Maurice :) I didnt know you have some funny bones there.. :D hahahaha

Andrea Dietrich October 30, 2014 at 9:20 PM WHY NOT in the contest??? (Just saw what you said to Jan down here) I repeat, this is GREAT humor.

Andrea Dietrich October 30, 2014 at 9:20 PM hahahaha. this made me laugh out loud!! FAVE for sure.

Debbie Guzzi October 30, 2014 at 7:54 PM Ut oh some dis-content here, and since I am of an age I understand. You need to know there is more than one place that is erotic ;) and use those LOL. BIG HUgs Light & Love

Dan Helppi October 30, 2014 at 5:43 PM Funny!

Liam Mcdaid October 30, 2014 at 5:19 PM smiling excellent pen maurice

James Fraser October 30, 2014 at 4:21 PM You have me chuckling with witty poem Maurice, love it, James :)

Tim Smith October 30, 2014 at 3:35 PM haha...love it Maurice.....now go straighten out that leaning tower !!!

Jan Allison October 30, 2014 at 1:40 PM Hilarious Maurice :-) i hope this does well for you in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Jan Allison October 30, 2014 at 5:19 PM Oh Maurice you simply should put it in the contest - humour is so so lacking around here at times - go on you look at the positive comments you have received - you have brightened all our days with your hilarious write:-) Hugs Jan xxx Maurice Yvonne October 30, 2014 at 4:40 PM not entering this in the contest Jan, so many people here having problems, I thought I would try to cheer people up.

Kevin Leake October 30, 2014 at 12:59 PM Hi Maurice, Funny after the years we're put on the old fire place, until it re-kindles. great stuff. Lol Kevin

Casarah Nance October 30, 2014 at 12:39 PM hahaha that is freakin' funny. Maurice Yvonne October 30, 2014 at 6:42 PM thanks Cas,