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make it take it

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                 yesss
              ourn first
                  met
          i were try'n tuh
           make my new
              basketball 
              in the hoop
            and she were 
        doodling with chalk
            on thuh court
        with hot pants and
                 halter

          i blew that shot

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Date: 6/9/2025 1:25:00 PM
Smiling James!
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James Peranteau
Date: 6/9/2025 1:39:00 PM
ty fer reading dear poet....remember back when sir. ') much love

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