Make it Quick

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"Make it quick" they barked. "We all have to pee." The cock legged one woofed right back, "Don't rush me!" Female dogs may have fleas But they don't wee on trees Trans surgery gets rid of that weenie! *Not entered in the contest but I couldn't stop myself from writing a limerick for that photo.

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/6/2024 4:25:00 AM

omg Lin this is hilarious on so many levels, shame its not for the contest but its a fabulous take on the image:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/6/2024 7:31:00 AM

oh there are several poets who think i only wrote about crap lol but i dont care lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 5/6/2024 7:28:00 AM

thanks, chickadee. I'll not vie for your crown lol

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/5/2024 5:01:00 AM

Lin, a cute one. -hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 5/5/2024 5:35:00 AM

Morning, Tania. Thanks, and hugs.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/4/2024 11:52:00 AM

Dearest Lin, you have packed a punch, blending humor with a powerful message of self-discovery and acceptance. I just loved how your poetic wit shines brightly, illuminating the path towards embracing one's true self. Your words are a blessing my friend, Daniel.

Lin Lane
Date: 5/4/2024 12:57:00 PM

Ah, Daniel, I never know what ridiculous humor or dreary darkness will drip from pen when an idea infringes upon my otherwise, mildly sane thoughts. But... I thank you for your diligence of reading me and leaving your great comments.