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Make Big Impression

We write poems about our surroundings and how we see and interpret things. I wrote this poem after attending a vestry meeting and thinking about what had transpired in it. I came home and God gave me this poem to write down so here it is. Make Big Impression Why will God with us want to be unruly? When He knows that we love Him truly But quite a big ego we often have had: Was enough to make Him fighting mad. Or time when with mouths popped off And bragged about great round of golf; God remained pleasant while we persisted And His help at times have often resisted. Our poor bodies to us became a prison; Gracious God's Son for us had arisen; This ugly world, He finally would leave And all He asked was for us to believe. No matter what's right or may be wrong Take these words and turn into some song Which of our love will be an expression Instead of on God making big impression. James Thomas Horn www.poetrysoup.com www.story-telling-around-the-world.com See if this makes any sense to you. Even put it in your website if you want to. Jim Horn

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Date: 2/11/2015 9:40:00 AM
May you always be inspired by Him, dear James, and pass his words to the rest!
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Date: 2/11/2015 10:02:00 AM
I am trying hard with God's aid of course to write poems. You run into a kinds of conflicts and misunderstandings. Most other poets like you are in agreement with me thou and thank you very much. Jim horn
Date: 2/11/2015 7:47:00 AM
Hey James, and a very big impression you have made with me. Such a lovely expression of our Father's love for us. No matter what - He made a way for us through His Beloved Son. Thank you for sharing this. Well done. Be Blessed, Neva
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