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Once upon a time in the land of make believe, the daring deceive.

In dreams, there are schemes some strive to achieve.

 

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~ Simple thoughts from the heart ~

         (For a faraway friend)

       Never give up or give in

 

** Courage can move Mountains **

Make Believe

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Once upon a time in the land of make believe, the daring deceive. In dreams, there are schemes some strive to achieve.
---------------------------------------- ~ Simple thoughts from the heart ~ (For a faraway friend) Never give up or give in ** Courage can move Mountains **
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Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 5:02 AM
Ahhh!! Some can move mountains, others only hills but all can do something which is wonderful. Thank you for sharing such an encouraging work. Way to go. 👏✍️. Sara K.
Nicole Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 6:39 PM
So true, and it's okay if some can only move hills. At least they're trying. Your kind words are greatly appreciated, Sara. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Gwyn Avatar
February 9, 2026 at 4:03 PM
Brandy, I love how this moved me with so few words....
Nicole Avatar
February 9, 2026 at 8:01 PM
Sometimes, it only takes a few words to touch the heart. Your kindness is greatly appreciated, Bruce.
Hamilton Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 7:04 AM
wonderful words Brandy courage definitely moves mountains tnks for your visit to my page hugs Shadow
Nicole Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 6:28 PM
Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. :) Thank you, Shadow. You're very welcome, for the visit to your page. You have a golden pen, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Maverick Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 10:13 PM
Maybe there is something in this for me? All the best for Christmas Brandy.!
Nicole Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 7:49 PM
Anything is possible, Joe. Thank you for your kind words and wishes. My best to you as well. Hugs, Brandy
Edmonds  Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 7:30 PM
Lovely words for your friend, and for some of us in need of your kind advice too… Belle
Nicole Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 7:10 PM
Dear Belle, so wonderful knowing my words of advice can help many in need. My friend appreciates them. Thank you for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 10:53 AM
this sure rings true for me. Well done.
Nicole Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 6:57 PM
Thanks, Andrea. I think many can relate. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Puddifoot Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 3:31 PM
words for your faraway friend to treasure..such a kind gesture to write this..thanks for visiting my page and leaving such a sweet comment :)
Nicole Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 4:39 PM
Thank you, Charlotte. A true friend is 'always' there, no matter what. You're very welcome. Your thoughts are beautiful and tender. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Alexander Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 7:02 PM
That was cool, thank you
Nicole Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 7:30 PM
Always be the light in someone's world. Thank you, Christian. :) Hugs, Brandy
Hind Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 6:30 PM
Beautiful!
Nicole Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 7:28 PM
Thank you, Paige. Your thoughts are always appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Kauffman Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 2:41 PM
Indeed, courage can move mountains, Brandy! What a profound, and moving, thought! How wonderful your friend has a companion on the journey. All of us need faithful companions. Thank you for reminding all of us of just that special relationship of courage and caring! Blessings of joy for your journey, sweet friend!
Nicole Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 7:22 PM
Dear Sam, I'm truly blessed, even from so faraway; I'm able to embrace moments through life with my friend. (A light not hidden, can be seen on a mountain.) Of course, my dear friend, we all need a reminder every now and then. True friends are hard to find. Your thoughts mean so much to me. Thank you for being here, and for being so kind. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
May Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 5:59 AM
Nice words of encouragement for your friend Brandy, best wishes
Nicole Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 6:55 PM
We can encourage in so many ways, and being there for a dear friend, is one way. Thank you Joseph, for always be so kind. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 2:53 AM
I am sure your thoughts and words have given your friend comfort and courage. You are a beautiful poet and a beautiful person. It is an honor to call you my friend. Hugs, John
Nicole Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 6:50 PM
Words from the heart can be felt along the wind, and I do believe my thoughts bring comfort. Courage and self confidence, to keep being true to who they are. Thank you John, for saying this about me. I appreciate you and your friendship. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Baker Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 1:26 AM
So nice to see your lovely heartfelt words, put to poetry to help a friend. It is always a joy for me to see someone helping another, especially a friend in need, Brandy. You're one of my favorite poets and I miss seeing your beautiful poems. Please write more when you can, my dear friend. Big bear hugs, Bill
Nicole Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 6:35 PM
Dear Bill, sometimes we need to be an echo, when a voice from faraway cannot be heard. I know in my heart, that my friend appreciates me and my support. Thank you for your lovely comment, and your compliment about me and my poetry. When the time is right, I'll post more, my dear friend. I appreciate you and your bear hugs. Hugs and smiles to you. :) Brandy
Parker Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 11:49 PM
True believers attacked by deceivers need friends to walk alongside thru the valley, hand in hand leading toward the summit of achievement. Lovely friend, M'Lady, lovely poem. :o)
Nicole Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 2:19 PM
Walking hand in hand with true/dependable friends, is reassuring indeed. Those that strive to stray the believers with false information, are not reliable. Lack of respect, for sure. Thank you, Arlo. So kind of you to address me in this way. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 6:24 AM
Dreams can do wonders for us when we need them. Much you said in just a few words my friend. Your heart speaks well to comfort your friend, Brandy.
Nicole Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 4:38 PM
So true Vijay, especially when embracing a magical dream. However, when those around you scheme in their dreams, waiting for the right moment be deceitful, that's wrong on many levels. You and your thoughts are always appreciated. I feel as though my friend has found comfort in my words. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Empress Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 5:30 AM
Very nice and empowering words for a faraway friend, sometimes we dont realize how a simple and thoughtful gesture like this can lift someone up! Very meaningful and heartfelt write this is. We live in a world of make believe, it takes strength to break free from negativity and rise again. Loved this. Sending you light today and always
Nicole Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 4:27 PM
Hi Ink Empress, so kind of you send light my way. You're correct, my dear friend. It does take "Strength" to rise above the negative of this world. Many believe what they want, or what someone tells them, before seeking the truth. Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. Yes, these words are from the heart and hold meaning and depth. I'm sure my friend feels my compassion. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
One Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 2:41 AM
Courage can move mountains as can faith.. we have to believe and have confidence.. trust in the universe... not everyone is sincere, not everyone as innocent as they seem... we must be true to ourselves and not let others actions affect our own dreams... nice two lines dear poet..
Nicole Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 4:14 PM
Indeed, it can. Thank you Silent One, for mentioning faith. It can be difficult determining who's honest and sincere. "Actions" always speak louder. If you walk down a road with someone that continues to push you, that's proof their sincerity is false. Thank you, my dear friend. Your kind words are appreciated. Hugs, Brandy
Anaya Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 8:07 PM
Don’t let no one get us down in a make believe world..overcast sky’s will clear to azure. Brandy your heart is filled with sincerity. Your friend will find comfort in your words. Xhugx Anaya
Nicole Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 3:49 PM
Dear Anaya, it's okay that your phone changed your words. That can be easily fixed. First, I would like to thank you for always being so kind and caring. I appreciate you and your friendship. Second, it's nice being the sunshine is someone's world. When dark clouds gather, light will always find a way to shine through. My friend feels my light, of this I am certain. Thank you for your wonderful comment and compliment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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