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Major Crash

Early morning on the road, Babysitting duties call. Traffic outbound's mostly light, Heading to the suburbs' sprawl. Suddenly, it all slows down; On the GPS, a flash - Point three miles up ahead, There has been a major crash. At a standstill, we are trapped; Nothing really we can do. Even with the updates, we are Stuck in lane without a clue. Not a siren to be heard. Not a horn, impatient, honks. Every driver is resigned To extra minutes in the Bronx. Inbound cars are flying by Yet we suckers sit and sit, Trying hard to take a breath And, hopefully, avoid a snit. All in the surrounding cars This morning share an equal fate - Even though we left on time, Each of us will show up late.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/4/2019 7:20:00 PM
Love the closing, Ilene. Aptly put! … One of the joys of urban life, esp. NY (and L.A.) Smiles, gw
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Date: 11/1/2019 8:01:00 PM
I am late today after spending a little over an hour in a traffic jam at the Hawai'i Convention Centre after another driver discovered driving through a red light is not a great time-saver! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 11/1/2019 7:37:00 PM
A very commonly shared experience, Ilene, which you masterfully convey in your poem....sadly, many others do not share your patience and acceptance of one of the inconveniences that are part of modern life. You did a very good job with this poem!
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Date: 11/1/2019 10:21:00 AM
Well written. The hope being that you all weren’t in the crash.
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Date: 11/1/2019 9:56:00 AM
There is nothing worse ilene, thankfully you got to your destination ok. Tom
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Date: 11/1/2019 9:36:00 AM
Loved, loved, loved this Ilene because I know what you are talking about and I can picture it in my mind so clearly with the phrase...been there, done that. : ) Really nicely done my friend.
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