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Majesty of Your Love

Uncontrollable words are flowing, please let me write, about you my beloved, the one who brings me delight. When lost in darkness, you guided me towards the light, now my desire is to forever be in the path of your sight. Chambers of my heart were closed with stubborn complexity, I was not broken, but with compassion you unlocked the key. The aroma of my elegant rose defines purity, now horizons seem optimistic with pristine clarity. Oh my sweetheart your tears are more precious to me than gold, my hands will catch every single one, even when you're old. I always knew behind your smile there was a story not told, my heart felt your pain as every chapter began to unfold. Many search for that exclusive love, that makes a soul dance, connecting two hearts within the realms of a divine romance. God created you for me, my eyes knew from our first glance, majesty of your love has left me in an intoxicated trance.
Silent One First written 26 January 2016
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Tracy Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 3:03 PM
Such a heartfelt and magnetizing write...Best wishes!
Babcock Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 8:12 PM
Oh my this is such a romantic write and this is going into my fav. love phyl
One Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Thank you..
Wanter Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 5:53 PM
I'm gonna play like it was written to me as a Valentine!
One Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 5:57 PM
I am sure you have a man to write such things for you... Thanks
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 5:34 PM
Well heck. That's one for the Valentine's Day smorgasbord. Fab.
One Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 5:56 PM
Old poem... thanks
Scars Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 6:37 AM
just beautiful dear Silent One, loved every word...:) -lullooo
One Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 8:34 AM
Thank you Lulloo..
Kannan Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 3:15 AM
Wow... This is so beautiful... Loved it...
One Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 8:34 AM
Thanks..
Showalter Swift Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 7:41 PM
So lovely Silent One
One Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 8:34 AM
Thank you Ingrid..
Dietrich Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 6:50 PM
an intoxicatingly romantic poem, Silent One. hmmm, is that word not in a dictionary. It got underlined in red!!
One Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 8:35 AM
Thank you Andrea.. Its ok to make up words lol
Kendrick Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 3:13 PM
Ahh!! Romantic work. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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February 5, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Thank you Sara..
Pinet Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 2:01 PM
You have painted a picture with words that inspire, educate, sadden and captivate the reader. Your descriptive use of the English language and your suburb imagery are second to none. Emile.
One Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Thank you Emile.. Nice to see you..
Hamilton Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 10:52 AM
Nice write Silent, I thought I remembered this one, thanks for bringing it back!! Now for the ones about father?
One Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 10:57 AM
Thanks John... Will have to try to find them... Or maybe write a new one
Horsman Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 10:00 AM
love the rhythm and rhyme
One Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 10:57 AM
Thanks
Gentile Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 9:11 AM
Perfect title, Silent One. for true love is majestic as you have beautifully penned here !!!
One Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 9:51 AM
Thank you Mike, this is an old one.. Going through some old poems..
Pandit Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Simply beautiful! A romantic depiction that is one of a kind. Awesome, Silent One!
One Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Thanks Vijay..
Michael Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 7:02 AM
Oh Yes...Love in all its splendor...
One Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 7:40 AM
Thanks...
Williams Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 6:11 AM
In one word "Awesome". I really love this divine romantic write of yours Si.Which romantic Soul would not love this sweet poem sent or read out loud, especially with Valentine Day around the corner. Excellent words to be written in a card. A fave for me....Maria
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February 5, 2018 at 6:26 AM
Thank you Maria, have to be careful with my replies, have some weird stalker on my case..
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