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Uncontrollable words are flowing, please let me write, about you my beloved, the one who brings me delight. When lost in darkness, you guided me towards the light, now my desire is to forever be in the path of your sight. Chambers of my heart were closed with stubborn complexity, I was not broken, but with compassion you unlocked the key. The aroma of my elegant rose defines purity, now horizons seem optimistic with pristine clarity. Oh my sweetheart your tears are more precious to me than gold, my hands will catch every single one, even when you're old. I always knew behind your smile there was a story not told, my heart felt your pain as every chapter began to unfold. Many search for that exclusive love, that makes a soul dance, connecting two hearts within the realms of a divine romance. God created you for me, my eyes knew from our first glance, majesty of your love has left me in an intoxicated trance.
Silent One First written 26 January 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/8/2018 3:03:00 PM
Such a heartfelt and magnetizing write...Best wishes!
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Date: 2/6/2018 8:12:00 PM
Oh my this is such a romantic write and this is going into my fav. love phyl
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 4:54:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 2/6/2018 5:53:00 PM
I'm gonna play like it was written to me as a Valentine!
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Silent One
Date: 2/6/2018 5:57:00 PM
I am sure you have a man to write such things for you... Thanks
Date: 2/6/2018 5:34:00 PM
Well heck. That's one for the Valentine's Day smorgasbord. Fab.
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Silent One
Date: 2/6/2018 5:56:00 PM
Old poem... thanks
Date: 2/6/2018 6:37:00 AM
just beautiful dear Silent One, loved every word...:) -lullooo
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Silent One
Date: 2/6/2018 8:34:00 AM
Thank you Lulloo..
Date: 2/6/2018 3:15:00 AM
Wow... This is so beautiful... Loved it...
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Silent One
Date: 2/6/2018 8:34:00 AM
Thanks..
Date: 2/5/2018 7:41:00 PM
So lovely Silent One
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Silent One
Date: 2/6/2018 8:34:00 AM
Thank you Ingrid..
Date: 2/5/2018 6:50:00 PM
an intoxicatingly romantic poem, Silent One. hmmm, is that word not in a dictionary. It got underlined in red!!
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Silent One
Date: 2/6/2018 8:35:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.. Its ok to make up words lol
Date: 2/5/2018 3:13:00 PM
Ahh!! Romantic work. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Silent One
Date: 2/5/2018 3:19:00 PM
Thank you Sara..
Date: 2/5/2018 2:01:00 PM
You have painted a picture with words that inspire, educate, sadden and captivate the reader. Your descriptive use of the English language and your suburb imagery are second to none. Emile.
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Silent One
Date: 2/5/2018 3:19:00 PM
Thank you Emile.. Nice to see you..
Date: 2/5/2018 10:52:00 AM
Nice write Silent, I thought I remembered this one, thanks for bringing it back!! Now for the ones about father?
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Silent One
Date: 2/5/2018 10:57:00 AM
Thanks John... Will have to try to find them... Or maybe write a new one
Date: 2/5/2018 10:00:00 AM
love the rhythm and rhyme
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Silent One
Date: 2/5/2018 10:57:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 2/5/2018 9:11:00 AM
Perfect title, Silent One. for true love is majestic as you have beautifully penned here !!!
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Silent One
Date: 2/5/2018 9:51:00 AM
Thank you Mike, this is an old one.. Going through some old poems..
Date: 2/5/2018 7:03:00 AM
Simply beautiful! A romantic depiction that is one of a kind. Awesome, Silent One!
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Silent One
Date: 2/5/2018 7:39:00 AM
Thanks Vijay..
Date: 2/5/2018 7:02:00 AM
Oh Yes...Love in all its splendor...
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Silent One
Date: 2/5/2018 7:40:00 AM
Thanks...
Date: 2/5/2018 6:11:00 AM
In one word "Awesome". I really love this divine romantic write of yours Si.Which romantic Soul would not love this sweet poem sent or read out loud, especially with Valentine Day around the corner. Excellent words to be written in a card. A fave for me....Maria
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Silent One
Date: 2/5/2018 6:26:00 AM
Thank you Maria, have to be careful with my replies, have some weird stalker on my case..

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