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Majestic Blue

MAJESTIC BLUE Mind blues in life makes things blurr Dark phase comes because it has to go The sufferer in me wants to mend her patch on her own To turn as hard as iron ,a strong fighter These moments come anytime out of the blue I pray that it does not happen to anyone Even once in a blue moon. So dear,my blue patch has gone away Sorry to keep away from you in this dark blue phase Waiting for you makes me restless on this coastline Solitary,,, away from Blue Bridge City humdrum These blue emergent waves ascend endlessly To meet the blue sky canopy above me This ethereal blue canvas consoles my eyes That wait eagerly for you Oh dear! release me off the reigns of longing In a blue gown adorning blue diamond accessory Holding this blue bouquet of fresh blooming flowers- Hyacinth,lilac,blue iris,blue orchids,blue bells My love!my heart pines for thee. Contest:The Colour blue. Sponsor:Janis Thompson. 28/1/2017. For Contest:United colours BLUE Sponsor:Silent One 28.02.2016

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Date: 1/31/2017 11:12:00 PM
So powerful with pain and passion. Congrats Rizwana! :)
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Date: 1/31/2017 7:38:00 AM
Congrats x well done x
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Date: 1/31/2017 1:43:00 AM
Congrats Rizwana, for your placement with this fine piece!!! ;-)
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Date: 1/30/2017 7:49:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Rizwana, congratulations on your placement :)
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Date: 1/30/2017 6:31:00 PM
A story of love and longing, written in the majesty of 'blue', Rizwana. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/30/2017 12:46:00 PM
Thanks for entering this well written verse. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 3/7/2016 7:44:00 AM
Awesome win....Linda
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Date: 3/1/2016 5:49:00 PM
Riz, what a beautiful write, all those lovely blues entwined within your poem, and a big congratulations on your placement and I am loving this 7 ~
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Date: 3/1/2016 10:43:00 AM
Lovely poem Rizwana, very descriptive.
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Date: 3/1/2016 5:08:00 AM
Many congrats on your win, Rizwana. Elaine
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Date: 2/29/2016 11:11:00 PM
Thnk you SIR.....regards
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Date: 2/29/2016 10:18:00 AM
Thnk you......regards
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Date: 2/29/2016 9:03:00 AM
Filled with many shades of blue and lots of good ideas. Best of luck in Silent Ones' contest. :)
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