Rizwana Bhurani Poet Free verse

Majestic Blue

                                  MAJESTIC BLUE

                       Mind blues in life makes things blurr
                       Dark phase comes because it has to go
                       The sufferer in me wants to mend her patch on her own
                       To turn as hard as iron ,a strong fighter
                       These moments come anytime out of the blue
                       I pray that it does not happen to anyone
                       Even once in a blue moon.


                       So dear,my blue patch has gone away
                       Sorry to keep away from you in this dark blue phase
                       Waiting for you makes me restless on this coastline
                       Solitary,,, away from Blue Bridge City  humdrum
                       These blue emergent waves ascend endlessly
                       To meet the blue sky canopy above me
                       This ethereal blue canvas consoles my eyes
                       That wait eagerly for you
                       Oh dear! release me off the reigns of longing


                
                       In a blue gown adorning blue diamond accessory
                       Holding this blue bouquet of fresh blooming flowers-
                       Hyacinth,lilac,blue iris,blue orchids,blue bells
                       My love!my heart pines for thee.


Contest:The Colour blue.
Sponsor:Janis Thompson.
28/1/2017.



                       For Contest:United colours BLUE
                       Sponsor:Silent One
                       28.02.2016
                       
                       

                                                       

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Sunita U.D Palawon January 31, 2017 at 11:12 PM So powerful with pain and passion. Congrats Rizwana! :)

Wendy Rycroft January 31, 2017 at 7:38 AM Congrats x well done x

Teddy Kimathi January 31, 2017 at 1:43 AM Congrats Rizwana, for your placement with this fine piece!!! ;-)

Claudia Polydoro January 30, 2017 at 7:49 PM A beautiful poem, Rizwana, congratulations on your placement :)

Sandra Haight January 30, 2017 at 6:31 PM A story of love and longing, written in the majesty of 'blue', Rizwana. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Janis Medders Tobechi January 30, 2017 at 12:46 PM Thanks for entering this well written verse. Congratulations on your placement.

Poet Destroyer A March 7, 2016 at 7:44 AM Awesome win....Linda

Constance La France March 1, 2016 at 5:49 PM Riz, what a beautiful write, all those lovely blues entwined within your poem, and a big congratulations on your placement and I am loving this 7 ~

James Inman March 1, 2016 at 10:43 AM Lovely poem Rizwana, very descriptive.

Elaine George March 1, 2016 at 5:08 AM Many congrats on your win, Rizwana. Elaine

Rizwana Bhurani February 29, 2016 at 11:11 PM Thnk you SIR.....regards

Rizwana Bhurani February 29, 2016 at 10:18 AM Thnk you......regards

Casarah Nance February 29, 2016 at 9:03 AM Filled with many shades of blue and lots of good ideas. Best of luck in Silent Ones' contest. :)