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stepping out of the post office, I turned towards sounds of loud crashing glass and shredding metal. Through the bright summer morning I can see what just happened, two cars (actually, a guy in a pickup truck and a lady in a car) tried to challenge amber lights, and upon seeing another vehicle competing for the same amber, both sped-up to beat the other at the last second. Well, it didn't work out real good, see'ins how they both were thinkin' alike. At mach-speed, they veered away from each other at the last second, the pickup slipped by (and kept on goin) but the car with the lady crashed into the barbershop on the corner (that's what I heard) throngs of onlookers converged on the scene. The lady sprawled halfway out of her car, with her lower half wedged under the steering wheel, staring lifeless at the sky. Joking to the crowd, one of the Postmen standing around shouted "she musta wanted a haircut" I heard laughter echoing around me. Anger filled me, I wanted to shout "what about her family? they don't know how much their lives just changed! how can you laugh?" ....... the Postman went back inside to sell stamps ...... I went home ......... she went to the morgue for identification.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/22/2012 5:15:00 PM
James, congratulation with your featured poem of the week. God Bless, you and your family during the holidays,, always~ PD
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Date: 11/21/2012 12:36:00 PM
Portrait of a sociopath, eh, James? People like he postman love to kill dogs. Good stuff. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 9/1/2009 9:24:00 AM
I stopped to help at an accident and found 3 dead bodies, one still twitching but already dead. I still get the creeps when I drive by the spot. We all react in different ways to a crisis. Vince
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Date: 5/18/2009 8:32:00 PM
Very powerful. People can be so cruel at times. It's like we bombard our senses all our lives with fake violence that the real stuff doesn't have meaning anymore.
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Date: 4/5/2009 12:59:00 PM
There is nothing funny about this. I am glad you are wise enough to be considerate of others. Helen
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Date: 3/17/2009 7:31:00 AM
Dear Jim, YOU pulled me into this POEM in the first 2 lines (Please read my POEM "Oh My GOD") YOU grip me my the Heart in the last 5 lines Excellently Portrayed I see what YOU saw I feel what YOU felt and I THINK YOURS ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/13/2009 9:14:00 AM
Oh wow, I could visualize the scene as I was reading this. Sad thing how this happens often. I think I would have turned around and smacked that postman if I heard what he had said...that was just down write rude. I liked the write though, good reading & imagery.
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Date: 3/12/2009 6:19:00 PM
Whoa dark and introspective, the fleeting value of life. We are such a curious people.
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