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Mail Order Bride

I feel the rumble of the wheels, 
and the tumble of my heart
Trembling, a look outside, 
as the landscape fades, and quickly grays,
to become swallowed by the dark

Adrift is the smoke, that chokes the sky, that I must leave behind...
Blurring as the evening light, is sighing, quite resigned

The steam has fogged the prairie plains
and I can't help but cry again.

With tear-stained eyes, I see my own reflection
I've left the world I knew before, that left me so rejected

I sit upright, my corset tight, I must get through the night
My muscles are stiff, and I am weary, afraid
The train heading west.....where the crimson sky fades

Where the grasses will sway, and the cattle will graze
and a stranger will pay...to share farming ways
I hope he will share a smile and be kind
What is ahead, only the future will find

Tomorrow, under a different sky, in a brand new way
I will wake up to a different sun, and to a wistful song of yesterday

'Though, I cannot find a star, through the drowning dredge of rain
Tonight the moon, I have left behind, wears a worried face again

I pray the sun will rise anew, and fill new skies above
I pray the life, and the stranger's hand .....will be the one I love


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1/24/15  "Railway Journeys" Contest, Sponsored by Shadow Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/5/2015 7:54:00 AM
Brilliant write my friend. Such images it evoked and deep ponderings on life!!! A super 7 on this from me... A gem it is......
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Date: 2/1/2015 1:58:00 PM
CARRIE, CONGRATULATIONS on your RAILWAY JOURNEY win *ALWAYS* SKAT
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Date: 1/27/2015 5:12:00 AM
Wonderful poem Carrie. Congrats on win . Love>rajat
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Date: 1/26/2015 12:04:00 AM
Nice memories retold, congrats on the win, Carrie
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Date: 1/25/2015 3:50:00 PM
love your take on the theme Carrie - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/25/2015 2:35:00 PM
Carrie, love your descriptive story,I wanted to find out the out come congratulations on your win, and 7. Blessings eve
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Date: 1/25/2015 1:58:00 PM
a brilliant journey Carrie congrats on placing 3rd hugs
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Date: 1/25/2015 10:11:00 AM
Carrie, your poem is just wonderful, I love it and best of luck in the contest and thanks so much for visiting my poetry ~~
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Date: 1/25/2015 7:37:00 AM
The emotions must have been flowing not knowing what this new life would bring...excellent... Hugs. Tim
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Date: 1/25/2015 3:42:00 AM
very cool and unique take on the contest. good luck in it.
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