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Mail Box Haiku

a white patch of cloud
a piece of dream in blue sky
rain is overdue


it is monsoon now
where are heaps of dark black clouds
her big drops of tears


from the south warm wind
filled with dense water vapour
mails may come tonight


a cloud on the tree
leaves buds bees on a joy spree
I will check mailbox
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June 30, 2016

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Date: 7/6/2016 3:00:00 PM
I really like this one, especially the second one. it's very haiku. (use mail instead of mails and this will be perfect!)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/7/2016 5:30:00 AM
Thanks you. Thanks for the constructive suggestion ...
Date: 6/30/2016 12:16:00 PM
this rainfall of a 'ku mesmerizes... the last one shows a sunny hints... very dine, probir.. huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/30/2016 8:16:00 PM
Juxtaposed line suggest many realities ...thank you ...

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