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a white patch of cloud a piece of dream in blue sky rain is overdue it is monsoon now where are heaps of dark black clouds her big drops of tears from the south warm wind filled with dense water vapour mails may come tonight a cloud on the tree leaves buds bees on a joy spree I will check mailbox __________________________________ June 30, 2016

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Date: 7/6/2016 3:00:00 PM
I really like this one, especially the second one. it's very haiku. (use mail instead of mails and this will be perfect!)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/7/2016 5:30:00 AM
Thanks you. Thanks for the constructive suggestion ...
Date: 6/30/2016 12:16:00 PM
this rainfall of a 'ku mesmerizes... the last one shows a sunny hints... very dine, probir.. huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/30/2016 8:16:00 PM
Juxtaposed line suggest many realities ...thank you ...

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