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Maiden of Musical Moonshine Premiere Contest Winner

Music is an undying art of soul ~ an abstract eden, where, euphonious unicorns glide in strawberry sonatas, amplifying rhapsody in ballads of flight, when fuchsia feathers tease those jingling breezes, infusing breaths in every lifeless aroma; where I can soar beyond the brushstrokes of symphonies that planktons sing to me, in the requiems of forsaken pearls, crooning with silenced shimmers beneath wavy blues. Maybe, I'm a songwriter without words, and my electric fingers trace the tunes of serene strings, when guitars weave a sonorous guilt midst ruby runes of regrets. I wish to keep swinging in a cosmic cadence, where celestial notes choreograph themselves in the moonwalking mellifluence of lunar legacies. I gossip with neon nightingales, laced with neutrinos and compel them to chant those healing incantations of love and glory, like the forlorn princess - Rapunzel, desiring to feel the glow of familiar lanterns, winged with hazy syncs of unsung yesteryears. I wonder if, I'm not meant to compose crystal canticles in a Disney duet, for, I believe, I'm a soul searcher in the flesh of a soloist, concocting an elixir of my existence through cinnamon anthems of mystical moonrises, as they softly unfold, a million unheard tempos, within tranquil memoirs. I'm the 'maiden of music' resting as a floret on every sepal, yearning to become a unique acapella of nature, where empathy has an ethereal dialect of nurturing spirits and tinkles of magical waterfalls whisper in gentle lachrymose lulls of our ambrosial Mother. When the harmony of my voice, kisses those ivory keys of the heart-shaped piano, they echo a tipsy secret in my sunset skin, making me believe ~ "I'm everywhere in the essence, yet nowhere to be found...", like the sweet scents of hummingbirds, smiling behind that first dusky star. "In each husky hallelujah of ribboned halts and replays, life is a song ~ where every lyric, phrases an ember of end, and when passionate heartbeats shall knit sombre medleys, I will hum in the last 'chef-d'oeuvre'... "

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Date: 4/24/2024 11:33:00 AM
Dear Hiya, golden poetess, the ornate quality to your imagery can't help but sweep my spirit and imagination up and away on your lyrical windswept soul-streams and dreamy "Rapunzel" moonbeams of poetic artistry. Indeed, I'm "swinging in a cosmic cadence" as "I gossip with neon nightingales" and revel in the beauty of your euphoric verse. Congratulations for your trophy win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes my dear poetry friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/10/2024 8:07:00 AM
Back to congratulate you... amazing writing. God bless you always, love, Gina
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Date: 2/10/2024 5:33:00 AM
Ah how gorgeous is that trophy next to your poem! This poem really made me go wow when you wrote for my contest too! Congratulations! Well deserved angelic star! Keep shining
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Date: 2/10/2024 12:51:00 AM
Love this work of art! Congratulations on your trophy win!
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Date: 1/15/2024 2:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/13/2024 7:09:00 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your well-earned top contest win, dear Hiya.
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Date: 1/13/2024 4:55:00 AM
Dear Hiya, you have a way with weaving words and emotions in a metaphorical manner that is easy for me to grasp now: you have improved so much as a poet and this is an exquisite take with excellent lyrical wordplay, where every line keeps getting better as the poem unfolds, you use poetic techniques very well too and i hope you will continue cosmically dancing and creating music as the maiden of music always! So creative and artistic! Congratulations on your win. Pleasure reading this
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Date: 1/11/2024 9:35:00 AM
Dear Hiya, the vibrant imagery in your writing reflects the depth, and cohesion of your poems and elevates our experience to a state of pure bliss. Your diction and impeccable word selection add a touch of elegance. The enchanting and evocative visuals transport us into a serene and enchanting world crafted by a poetess who possesses a mastery over language. You are not merely a songwriter, but a visionary who ventures beyond conventional lyrics, fearlessly exploring new musical arrangements.
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Date: 1/10/2024 1:38:00 AM
How soulfully you define music! How perceptive your poetic heart dear Hiya! Reading your free verse line by line savouring a unique aura embracing a rare beauty of dicton.. enchanted by heart elating and sigh relieving imageries that let you send into oblivion the mundane world to carry you serenely and smoothly to world reigned by a poetess who owns the world of words.. who has the keys of its treasure! You are a songwriter who soars beyond the usual lyrics.. You are the composer who dares new melodies! You are a poetic soul able to wing above the limits of static visions and dreams and dance along with stars in a wide space! You are a "soul searcher" who imparts her sight and insight to avid readers.. You are a harmonious voice so sweet and wondrous to hear! Always a tremendous joy to read your gems! Stay always blessed! My deepest regards.
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Date: 1/9/2024 11:50:00 PM
You've excellently described life as a song in the most beautiful satiating words my dear poet friend. For me, you're one of the exceptionally talented poets here my dear poet friend Hiya. My pleasure again to read from you. Thanks for sharing this precious masterpiece. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 1/8/2024 3:28:00 PM
A masterpiece poem, Hiya. I so love your beautiful expressions. This is a fave.
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Date: 1/8/2024 1:26:00 PM
wow you need not sing aloud your poem dances on the page of my heart, and oh what music it makes, if I didn't know better I'd gage your a Nymph of imagination love it gl
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Date: 1/8/2024 1:24:00 PM
Your poem reminds us that there isn't enough music. The descriptions and flow of the verses makes this a non pareil read.
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Date: 1/8/2024 4:25:00 AM
Very beautiful lines, dear Hiya, and if life were a song you would be the whole orchestra. Are you a musician by any chance? I wouldn't be surprised as you seem to be a gifted Soul who possesses many great talents. Good luck in the contest, I see WINNER in lights already. Love and Hugs xxx
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Date: 1/8/2024 12:32:00 AM
Superb imagery. Your poem is indeed musical in tone and much to be appreciated.
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Date: 1/7/2024 3:55:00 PM
I shouldn't be surprised that you're a musician too, along with your beautiful poetry. This was enchanting, and I enjoyed this. Lots of light!
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Date: 1/7/2024 10:18:00 AM
You sing a nice song of life. You are gifted and talented poet.
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:37:00 AM
"I'm the 'maiden of music' resting as a floret on every sepal, yearning to become a unique acapella of nature,"..... Indeed you are a maiden of music..... your poems are coordinated sounds, lifting us to great heights of enjoyment. Your vocabulary is highly ornate and your word choice, excellent. "I can soar beyond the brushstrokes of symphonies that planktons sing to me, in the requiems of forsaken pearls, crooning with silenced shimmers beneath wavy blues." Music lifts you to planes beyond ephemeral. May you rise to international levels in poetry, dear Hiya. Soooo beautiful ! !
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:33:00 AM
You always come up with such colorful and amazing imagery. Are you a sister to Ink Empress by chance? You both are so brilliant with this kind of writing.
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:42:00 AM
Awh, thank you so much for your kindness, beautiful Andrea..Ah, no actually I'm not her twin sister or sister, but yes one can say that, we do have twinning souls as we have similar nature and likings in poetry as well as life...and that's why it reflects in our poems too, for we both love metaphors..she's actually like my Fairy Goddess :) Sending you many best wishes, love & light, truly appreciate your wonderful visit ~
Date: 1/7/2024 8:28:00 AM
Oh Hiya a wonderful take on the contest.. its an enchanting exploration of the transcendent power of music, presented with vivid imagery and poetic finesse. The language used is evocative, creating a dreamlike atmosphere that immerses the reader into the ethereal realm of the speaker's musings.. The opening lines portray music as an "undying art of the soul," an abstract Eden where euphonious unicorns glide in strawberry sonatas. This imaginative and whimsical imagery sets the stage for a
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:29:00 AM
celebration of the transformative and otherworldly qualities of music.. It concludes with a powerful reflection on life as a song, where every lyric phrases an ember of an end. The promise to hum in the last 'chef-d'oeuvre' adds a poignant and affirming note, suggesting a continuation of the artistic journey even in the face of life's inevitable conclusion.. Good luck in the contest dear..
Date: 1/7/2024 7:33:00 AM
Notes of music, Hiya. Well done like always . Many blessing to you
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Date: 1/7/2024 7:23:00 AM
I wonder how that conversation goes along with those nightingales. Creative work you have penned. Thank you for sharing your thoughts about life being a song. Your visits to my page are uplifting. Sara K
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Date: 1/7/2024 5:56:00 AM
Beautiful as always, Hiya. Your verses sing brilliantly in song of life. Ornate words paint your journey. A winner, as always.
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Date: 1/7/2024 5:26:00 AM
Your poem/song is amazing. You are a songwriter your notes are words that play on ears and minds with imagery and wonderful word choice! I know you will do well in the contest! Good Luck!
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Date: 1/7/2024 2:54:00 AM
Good luck in the contest. Your poem is amazing!
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