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Magnolia's Flame

In the stillness, summer is thick with sweat Its sweet salt drips on parted lip's desire The scented Magnolia's silhouette Inspires ember strewn hearts that's set on fire Beneath we lay so closely wrapped in love Under flowers hung soft in pale moonlight So luscious and green the leaves talk above Soft dreamy whispers in streams of starlight You've taken my heart, my being, my core A Soul-Eater, your rapture consumes me Born in this blanket of estrus I pour To empty my essence fearlessly free Under the Magnolia's perfumed pale We loved to be loved, our hearts to unveil May 29, 2020 Corrected 6-14-20 N-A -Re-run 7 Poetry Contest John Hamilton Summer's Heat Sonnet Poetry Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton

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Date: 2/7/2021 10:46:00 AM
What a lovely scene you have set beneath a magnolia tree in summer bloom. A perfect setting for a romantic sonnet, Lonna. Congratulations on your win!
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 2/10/2021 5:19:00 PM
Hi Sam! It is the escape of the Poet that gives them license! LOL
Date: 10/3/2020 3:11:00 PM
I am made into a delightful dunkard by your words, Lonna, soberly I say unto you ... an examplary executed submission my friend, blessings on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/3/2020 4:36:00 PM
Thank you William for continually inspiring!!!!
Date: 6/17/2020 1:53:00 AM
This is gorgeous Lonna! Subtle, romantic and mysterious at the same time. Congratulations on your win :)
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 6/20/2020 11:37:00 AM
Thank you Aditi for your expressions of appreciation. They of course mean a lot to me!
Date: 6/15/2020 9:38:00 AM
This is an excellent write Lonna, I'll give it a pass this time because it's so good. The contest stated not an N/A in one of my contests, also the title was not as directed one of the reasons it didn't place originally! Please check all contest rules carefully next time!
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 6/15/2020 11:25:00 AM
Thanks John for the encouragement! Truly appreciate it.
Date: 6/9/2020 11:05:00 AM
Lonna, I think my room just mysteriously got a little warmer... seriously this is a wonderful sonnet, using the Magnolia as a centering device, you describe so eloquently and passionately the physiological and psychological journey of being deeply in love. The "ember strewn hearts set on fire" is so evocative. Your last line is perfect. I hope this gem wins top spot in the contest, my friend. ~ John
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 6/9/2020 8:19:00 PM
I am so taken with your innate understanding of my writing. Its magical! Thank you again dear Poet!!!
Date: 5/30/2020 9:09:00 AM
Wow, this is so romantic and sensual, Lonna, so nicely penned. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/30/2020 11:33:00 AM
Thank you John for the hugs and kind words. I truly appreciate your words.

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