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Poetic Form: Free Verse

Inspired: 2023 November 22

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Close up, the finality of our work will be revealed from the encased sealed specimen, now under the microscope, three years of research and hundreds of failed attempts ... alas, this is the last of them and this will give humanity ~~eternal life~~ be careful doctors, oh no, the light spectrum its too ... no, no, no, omgoodness, "Now we're all going to die!"

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Date: 11/23/2023 1:14:00 PM
Almost finding that eternal elixir, then something goes wrong, Very nicely pennned
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Date: 11/23/2023 2:15:00 PM
Albeit, leans a bit fantastical, Julia did insist on no disclosures, c'est la vie mon ami. Mahalo, Joseph. Aloha, William

Book: Reflection on the Important Things