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MAGNIFICATION

Close up, on the smooth couth meretricious pod, vibrantly violating my optics violently, even through the microscope. Its swarthy stare is maliciously resplendent and evoked from parsimony. Nature's beauty is suicidal. pulchritude through lens, but a spike to the neck. Even in risk, identified ignorance is ignored. veracity is a voodoo doll, if you toss it out it re-emerges like a comet relentlessly. the microscope aggrandize on its perilous magnificent shock. like an arboreal boat it is shielded but pops in agitation, adjudicating what personality to adorn. It feels like a placid charade, for toxicity comes with respect and beliefs, adherence. just like a horse belch loyalty and a den of destruction her seeds swell calmly in hot dosage bean. opulently lethal. I see her dancing high on the bed of pleasure through the microscope, with feets enveloped in predicament and her lips covered in crimson ichor. A queen, so clean, a routine as green.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/4/2024 7:11:00 AM

Interesting shift at the end. May your thoughts continue to be magnified through your art.

Tonye George
Date: 5/4/2024 8:00:00 AM

Cheers Richy. Thank you.

Valsa George

Date: 2/19/2024 4:17:00 AM

So deep and powerful. Nature's beauty can be seen magnified. But the dangers and ugliness, its toxicity hiding behind.... do we see? "Veracity is a voodoo doll"....this usage has deep implications. You are indeed not just a poet, but a profound thinker. Great poem dear young friend....

Tonye George
Date: 3/6/2024 4:39:00 AM

True Valsa we never get to see the dark parts, nature is a beautiful charade. Truth is indeed a Voodoo doll when you throw it, it comes back again and again. Thank you for your lovely comments, dear friend.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/9/2024 10:45:00 PM

Woah, this is breathtaking!! I dunno where to begin praising this artistic beauty, you've really presented a creative canvas here, where readers can float in vividness of colours and depth, swirling in the seas of your poetic thoughts.I love so many lines here, that have been intricately woven with powerful insight such as "Nature's beauty is suicidal","I see her dancing high on the bed of pleasure through the microscope" Gosh, absolutely brilliant!"veracity is a voodoo doll" Your prowess shines

Tonye George
Date: 2/10/2024 3:01:00 PM

Thank you Hiya for these honest and lovely comment.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/22/2023 11:31:00 PM

This is such artistic creativeness flowing in such eloquence throughout, I absolutely love the depth of this and also how well you’ve played around with words for this prompt. Theres some lines that really hit strong for me like “ Nature's beauty is suicidal. pulchritude through lens, but a spike to the neck.“ how powerful and profound.- and the ending too , “ I see her dancing high on the bed of pleasure through the microscope, with feets enveloped in” such a poetic genius you are. Loved this

Tonye George
Date: 12/29/2023 9:29:00 AM

Dear Ink thank you so much for your lovely insight and comment. I love your works too and I'm happy to always see your pieces. Compliments of the season, I've been away for a while, hope you're having a lovely celebration?

Bill Baker

Date: 12/22/2023 9:34:00 PM

Very creative poetry, Tonye. I enjoyed the way you chose to reveal the whole story, not holding back the positive or negative that creates the whole. The imagery and intensity were both great. I'm following your poetry now, and hope you'll continue to read and comment on mine so we can become friends. A poet friend to be, Bill

Tonye George
Date: 12/22/2023 10:20:00 PM

Sure bill, cheers to that. Thank you for your beautiful insight, I appreciate.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/22/2023 12:29:00 PM

I see this one as creative and descriptive. I am wondering about that VooDoo doll though. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Tonye George
Date: 12/22/2023 1:32:00 PM

Always a pleasure reading your piece. Truth is like a VooDoo doll, if you throw it away, it comes back again and again.

Tom Woody

Date: 12/19/2023 2:52:00 PM

You use a lot of hard words for me to understand. Still, your poetry is high end and we're glad you're here Tonye

Tonye George
Date: 12/19/2023 3:36:00 PM

Lol Tom. Thank you so much. I'm glad you're here to support.

Silent One

Date: 12/19/2023 12:35:00 PM

Love the use of words here.. Your poem is a striking exploration of the dichotomy inherent in nature's allure, depicted through a lens that magnifies both its enchanting beauty and the underlying dangers it conceals. The choice of words, such as 'smooth couth,' 'meretricious pod,' and 'violating my optics violently,' creates a sensory experience that mirrors the intensity of the observation...

Tonye George
Date: 12/19/2023 2:19:00 PM

I cannot appreciate you enough silent one for your support from day one, it has motivated me to keep on, even days I don't feel like it. Thank you for seeing this piece for exactly what it is.