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Close up you can see the colossal amounts of energy
it took to grow this plant from a seed
An even closer look through the microscope,
inside lies the complete genetic information
Images of texture I can almost feel
Spikes that pop up prickly come alive
I have no limits to magnification
I can see vibrant stars dead center
Elements of sunshine tan and green
Sediments of gill filaments in V-shapes
Arrows in grooves with silver linings 
Natures details to resemble filigree
Mucus glowing its sickle-shaped petal lobes
Milky sap growing within, aligning 
milk vines and perfect pinwheels 
Nature’s own flower arrangements
Under a microscope

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/9/2023 8:57:00 AM

What a lovely write/pretty pictures. I love butterflies. Good Luck... Have a blessed day/weekend.................

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/15/2024 9:04:00 PM

Belated thank you, sweet Paula, missed this one! hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 12/8/2023 10:39:00 AM

Whoa you’ve done an exquisite job on this magnification prompt dear anaya, i was looking at it but wasnt sure what exactly she wants, or is looking for. Ive however written previously for an anthology on similar prompt. I really love your detailed descriptive diction and the way this flows in such a creativ manner: I believe this should do very well in the contest. Pleasure reading you always. Sending your light

I Am Anaya
Date: 12/8/2023 10:52:00 AM

Ink, it's plant or mineral magnified. One or the other makes for an interesting challenge! Thank you for your kind words. xhugs I appreciate the light you send me! ')

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/8/2023 10:36:00 AM

Wonderful poem. I had to enter in the fragrance of your delight.

I Am Anaya
Date: 12/8/2023 10:49:00 AM

thank you, Victor! xhugs

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/7/2023 5:57:00 PM

A botanist with a quill for a side-kick, exceptional penning, Anaya. I could be wrong, mayhaps an astrologist or farmer-in-the-dell, if anything, a winner in my book, my friend. Aloha on this not too far from Pearl Harbor Dec 7th day, William

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/8/2023 12:04:00 PM

It's sorta inescapable here but it does trend a memorial-like atmosphere, no gloomy faces just souls remembering. Aloha

I Am Anaya
Date: 12/8/2023 10:42:00 AM

I wish I could be all! Thank you, William! I read that 82 years ago, 2,403 service members and civilians were killed unprovoked. Thank you for reminding us, Aloha Anaya

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 12/7/2023 5:07:00 PM

An imaginative and creative poem my friend. A wonderful write. Best of luck in the contest.

I Am Anaya
Date: 12/8/2023 10:37:00 AM

Thank you, Jerry! Good to see you.

Silent One

Date: 12/7/2023 4:17:00 AM

wonderful take on the contest Anaya.. IT is so vivid what you have magnified here... a delightful poem to read.. Best of luck in the contest..

I Am Anaya
Date: 12/7/2023 6:37:00 AM

Thank you, SO! Your encouragement always inspires me. Peace -Anaya

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/6/2023 7:00:00 PM

Oh my, dear Anaya, this took me on a whole vibrant adventure as if I'm in a fairyworld and getting the chance to become miniature whilst looking at these unique wonders of nature.. Your descriptions are so amazing and they create a picturesque view in my mind.. Beautifully conveying the genesis of the magical flower.. Wow.. This is truly profound and breathtaking! Brilliantly crafted... :)

I Am Anaya
Date: 12/7/2023 6:35:00 AM

Thank you Hiya! It's nice to see you. Your support and encouragement mean so much to me, sweet one. Peace -Anaya