Notes About The Poem

11/24/2023

~ 1st Place ~ Magnification Poetry Contest sponsored by Julia Ward

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Photo collage by Mark Toney using Canva Pro.  Photo credit: Microscope by Billion Photos using Canva Pro Content License.

Magnification

Close up, secrets uncovering
I find myself hovering over
a modern, optical microscope
Out of focus (coarse adjustment)
Blurred image corrected,
revealing… clear-felled trees?
Sharper detail (fine adjustment)
Microscope mesmerizing as colors burst
Scale thickness less than 0.55 micron
Small rake angle and smoothness
implies low friction coefficient
Light permanence even, shadowless—
Finest quality from Istanbul
Wish I had a roomful
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Zahid Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 9:49 AM
That's beautiful
Toney Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 6:53 AM
Paghunda, thank you for making my day a little brighter!
Ward Avatar
December 21, 2023 at 7:05 AM
Well done, Mark, for your splendid poem getting first place in my contest, "Magnification".
Toney Avatar
December 21, 2023 at 10:08 AM
Thank you, Julia, for your brilliant contest and for liking my poem. I notice in your biography that you have set up well over 100 poetry contests on Poetry Soup. Well done.
Fowler Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 9:17 AM
A lovely collage for your poem Mark. Microscopes are fascinating inventions that allow for nearsighted clarity. Nicely written! :)
Toney Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 12:30 PM
Thank you for the lovely comment, Linda Alice.
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