Magical Ocean Hs

waves gently caress
washing ashore sea treasures ~
beach scavenger hunt

a flock of seagulls
swoop and steal beach crustaceans ~
crab delicacy

a warm ocean breeze
wafts of beach roses and brine ~
sweet salty essence

dark ocean water
dance and reflect in moonlight ~
a calming cadence

the magical ocean beach ~
hidden beauty within reach

5/10/23
Contest: Haiku Sonnet Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joanna Daniel
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Smith Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 11:25 AM
As close as one can get to the real scene in poem. Suspect you have retentive memory maybe even photographic. reminds me of walks with Romney who took listeners on nature walk on radio. You are really a talented poet with complete understanding of what the craft in right hands can do for peoples well-being. Like how you match sounds, smells and sights to what anyone on walk along a beach would experience. Poem paced to a walk to soak up atmosphere. Best regards from this lucky 70 yr old in NZ
Kitchin Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 4:08 PM
David, thank you.
Crandall Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 8:03 PM
Tania, nice poem, bringing the beach to us in all senses.
Kitchin Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 3:39 AM
David, thank you.
Watt Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 12:21 PM
Tania, I resonate with BJ's assessment that this haiku sonnet captures the absolute essence of the ocean beach. I love your imagery and the sights and sounds of the seashore... as you say, magical. I particularly enjoyed "dark ocean water / dance and reflect in moonlight ~ / a calming cadence". I missed this when it was new, but glad I did not miss it altogether- it is a delight to read. Belated congrats for the worthy honours of POTW and contest win ~ John
Kitchin Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 4:52 PM
John, thank you.
Miller Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 1:56 AM
Oh yes! Wonderful, congratulations.
Kitchin Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 3:34 AM
Terry, thank you.
Andresen Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 3:08 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the Haiku/Sonnet contest, Tania - hugs
Kitchin Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 3:46 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you, hugs.
Daniel Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 1:21 AM
Graceful throughout, Tania, double congratulations on POTW honour and your top win in my contest:)
Kitchin Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 3:46 AM
Joanna, thank you and thank you for my placement.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 6:12 AM
Hidden beauty within reach' wow yeah what a beautiful beach poem i enjoyed yayy! So nice to meet your delightful poems, this one fab in imagery. Smiled at the crustacean stanza. Kudos!! CONGRATS on your POTW.
Kitchin Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 1:14 PM
S.Zaynab, thank you.
Hind Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 8:59 AM
Beautifully done! I liked it!
Kitchin Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 4:10 PM
Paige, thank you.
Meadows Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 9:49 PM
A lovely poem. Well done.
Kitchin Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 2:31 PM
Jeanette, thank you.
Nicole Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 5:08 PM
So beautiful, the moonlight's refection dancing upon the ocean. The images you paint, leave me in complete awe. Congratulations Tania, on Poem of the Week. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Kitchin Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 6:36 PM
Brandy, thank you.
Edmonds  Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 11:20 AM
A magical Haiku sonnet Tania, brings back lovely memories of summer holidays by the beach. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the week… Belle
Kitchin Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 12:32 PM
Belle, thank you.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 7:52 AM
Dear Tania, congratulations on receiving honour of POTW. Beautifully penned with descriptive ocean vocabulary, and an impressive format. Love ~ Mala
Kitchin Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 8:10 AM
Mala, thank you.
La France Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 7:45 AM
Tania, beautifully penned and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE WEEK honor !
Kitchin Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 8:10 AM
Constance, thank you.
Fowler Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 7:11 AM
Nice HS Tania. The beach is a magical place. Congratulations on POTW!
Kitchin Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 8:10 AM
Linda, thank you.
Pandit Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 5:36 AM
Back to congratulate you on POTW, Tania. Enjoy your special week.
Kitchin Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 5:51 AM
Vijay, thank you.
Lane Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 3:51 AM
Now, THIS is creative writing worthy of being recognized as the Poem of the Week. Congratulations, Tania!
Kitchin Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 3:58 AM
Lin, thank you, hugs.
Kavanagh  Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 3:02 AM
Congratulations Tania on a really nice chill out POTW, can I just add a hammock and beer, please! Cheers David
Kitchin Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 3:33 AM
David, thank you.
Allison Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 1:59 AM
Many congrats on POTW Tania, i am so so so thrilled for you:-) hugs jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 3:34 AM
Jan, thank you, hugs.
Cunningham Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 1:15 AM
Back with congratulations to you Tania on the well deserved honour of POTW. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 3:36 AM
Tom, thank you and I hope you have a great weekend.
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 10:15 PM
Oh, this is so beautiful. I miss the ocean so much, and not quite sure I will ever have the opportunity to visit there again. You have brought it to life for me, touching on wonderful memories of long ago when I was young Tanya. I love it, and will treasure it in my faves. Well done. Thank you for painting the absolute essence and wonder in this amazing poem <3
Kitchin Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 3:36 AM
BJ, thank you.
Andresen Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 2:24 PM
- Excellent written, Tania :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a great weekend :) - hugs
Kitchin Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 4:32 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you, hugs.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 1:06 AM
So many haikus perfectly constructed. Well done.
Kitchin Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 3:49 AM
Victor, thank you.
Pandit Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 5:41 AM
Exquisite images in every haiku. Splendidly done, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 5:45 AM
Vijay, thank you.
Allison Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 4:46 AM
what fabulous imagery - it looks a really challenging form - not sure my brain is up to so many haiku lol:-) hugs jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Jan, thank you, hugs.
Lane Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 2:07 AM
Tania, your string of Haiku very effectively tells the story of a typical day at the beach, sans humans. I wish you well in Jo's contest.
Kitchin Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 3:16 AM
Lin, thank you, hugs.
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