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as moonlight shadows
dance on the inky blue ocean
and watch as they sparkle and shimmer like tiny stars,
pirouetting gracefully like prima ballerinas with the ocean as their stage
Writing Challenge 1, September 2019 - Eight Line Form
Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode
Checked with PS Syllable counter 1,1,2,3,5,8,13,21
I'm so proud of this poem so it's also submitted to Caren Krutsinger's contest
Also submitted to Tania kitchin's contest as I think it is probably the best poem I have written this year and is currently number one in the best new poems list. I would love for it to be considered worthy enough for a trophy win and I also want to submit it to soup for consideration in their anthology
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