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Magical Moonlight

I
love
walking
at midnight
as moonlight shadows
dance on the inky blue ocean
and watch as they sparkle and shimmer like tiny stars,
pirouetting gracefully like prima ballerinas with the ocean as their stage 

9/3/19
Writing Challenge 1, September 2019 - Eight Line Form
Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode
Checked with PS Syllable counter 1,1,2,3,5,8,13,21

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James Marshall Goff Date: 11/27/2019 5:28:00 PM Nice poem, Jan Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/3/2020 5:12:00 PM Thanks so much james:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin Date: 10/16/2019 4:47:00 AM Jan, this is a gorgeous poem with beautiful imagery! A fav for me! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/3/2020 5:10:00 PM Thanks Tania I am proud of this one! :-) Hugs Jan xx

Estela Canama Date: 10/4/2019 3:39:00 AM Such a wonderful experience with the moonlight. I love the imagery of your poem. It captures my senses with much alacrity. Thank you for sharing! Congrats! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/3/2020 5:10:00 PM Thanks so much estela, sorry for the delay in responding:-( Hugs Jan xx

CayCay Jennings Date: 10/3/2019 6:25:00 PM Lovely, the imagery will linger in my mind. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/3/2020 5:09:00 PM Thanks so much caycay:-) miss you on soup:-( hope all is good with you and the family:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ts Poetry Date: 10/2/2019 4:42:00 PM I can picture you watching as you and hubby walk along the shoreline. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/3/2019 6:31:00 AM We often go for midnight walks not usually along the beach but along the shore roads:-) Hugs Jan xx

P.S. Awtry Date: 9/30/2019 10:48:00 AM That last line is just gorgeous! No wonder this is the number one poem of the month! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/1/2019 7:06:00 AM Thanks ps I am so proud of this poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Franci Hoffman Date: 9/29/2019 7:21:00 PM Beautiful piece with stunning imagery. Well deserving of acclaim. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/1/2019 7:05:00 AM Thanks franci :-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton Date: 9/27/2019 1:09:00 PM Back with congrats on top spot Jan, see how good you can write, very worthy top spot, enjoy all the accolades! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/27/2019 5:54:00 PM Thanks John I am really proud of this poem and I think it proves I can write the odd decent poem from time to time:-) hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/27/2019 12:40:00 PM You did a fabulous job with the theme, Jan, and the imagery is out of this world! Congratulations on a well-deserved top win! Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/27/2019 5:53:00 PM Thanks Carolyn this is one of my favourite poems I've written this year:-) hugs Jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart Date: 9/26/2019 9:44:00 AM Jan, congrats for #1 on best new poems page!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/26/2019 11:56:00 AM Thanks Dale it truly is a favourite poem of mine and I am really pleased with the way it turned out:-) hugs Jan xx

Melissa Ray Date: 9/24/2019 1:48:00 PM Very nicely done. I enjoyed the beauty of this poem. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/26/2019 11:56:00 AM thank you Melissa:-) hugs Jan x

Regina Mcintosh Date: 9/24/2019 9:55:00 AM Congrats on POTD... Beautiful and Hugs to you with blessings, too Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/26/2019 11:55:00 AM Thanks Regina:-) hugs Jan x

Charlie Way Date: 9/23/2019 8:48:00 PM A poem endowed with Zen. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/26/2019 11:54:00 AM thanks Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

Wendy Watson Date: 9/23/2019 12:38:00 PM This conjured up such a beautiful picture, Jan. I am not surprised that you were proud of it and congratulate you on its success. I'm sure that Brian would be delighted to 'air' it too on his fibonacci blog. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/26/2019 11:54:00 AM thanks Wendy:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Knowlton Date: 9/22/2019 10:06:00 AM A truly beautiful poem Jan, and so worthy of #1. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/22/2019 2:24:00 PM thanks so much Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

Dean Wood Date: 9/18/2019 12:20:00 PM This is truly beautiful Jan. Congratulations! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/22/2019 2:24:00 PM Thanks Dean:-) hugs Jan xx

Smita Kulkarni Date: 9/17/2019 2:14:00 PM Very beautifully written! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/22/2019 2:24:00 PM thanks Smita:-) hugs Jan xx

Frederic Parker Date: 9/16/2019 5:47:00 PM A beautiful poem, Dear Poet...congratulations, not only on your contest win but also being number one on best new poems list...well done Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/22/2019 2:21:00 PM Thanks so much Frederic:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France Date: 9/16/2019 11:14:00 AM Jan congratulations on your win in my writing challenge. This a difficult form and you penned it beautifully. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/22/2019 2:20:00 PM I've got to thank YOU for inspiring me with your contests, without your comment about the challenge of writing this form on your contest notes the poem would probably never have been written:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra L. Weiss Date: 9/16/2019 10:54:00 AM It is one to be proud of Jan. It is beautiful! A favorite for me. Lovely imagery accompanies your beautiful words. Congratulations on its #1 spot, and your big win. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/22/2019 2:19:00 PM thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane Date: 9/16/2019 6:03:00 AM You made it to the top rung of the ladder! Wonderful, Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/22/2019 2:18:00 PM thanks so much Lin:-) I don;t remember the last time I was on the top of the list and am delighted:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus Date: 9/14/2019 11:31:00 AM What lovely imagery, Jan, and I love those pirouetting prima ballerinas! Congratulations on your superb win...and being at the top of Best New Poems!! Hugs // paul Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/22/2019 2:18:00 PM It makes me think of Valentina!:-) hugs Jan xx

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 9/12/2019 1:34:00 PM I love this! A new fav for me. Wonderful win. Congrats Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/22/2019 2:17:00 PM thanks Jeanne it is one of my favourite poems of the year:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/12/2019 12:53:00 PM - Jan, congratulations on your top winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/21/2019 7:02:00 PM Thanks so much Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane Date: 9/12/2019 6:07:00 AM Such lovely thoughts you've created, Jan. How perfectly they lead the mind's imagination to walk the sands with you. Congratulations on your winning entry! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/21/2019 7:02:00 PM Thanks Lin it is seldom i write this form:-) hugs Jan xx

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