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Magical Candles

Winter descend upon the metropolis "The Festival of Lights" will arrive shortly eight days which celebrate the winter solstice and the victory of a people over their opressor An unlikely victory whose legacy remains with us today Watching the candles burn One is transported to a place Where hopes do not die This will be a Hanukkah to remember Hundreds of years after the events We recall how the oil burned for eight nights instead of one A living expression of faith and a victory which belongs to the ages

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/4/2013 7:40:00 PM
I very much like the way this read, and the story line, well done ;}
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Date: 2/17/2013 12:01:00 AM
Such a resonant piece Matthew; It touches on the known things that merge with the unseen entity's and Opportunity's we sense in awareness!
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Date: 12/30/2012 1:01:00 PM
This is one great poem Matt. A living expression of faith. I like that. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 12/21/2012 10:06:00 PM
Matt, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD
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Date: 12/13/2012 8:58:00 AM
Matthew; I like the way you described the magical candles. Something that will be carried on for generations to come. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 12/9/2012 2:47:00 AM
the things that are passed down is like an ancient artifact..has to be taken care of throughout the years.. greatwrite and amazing history.(: ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 12/4/2012 1:49:00 PM
I don't know this eight year history but it sounds remarkable. Great poem to tell it!!!
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Date: 12/3/2012 5:09:00 PM
Extremely well expressed thought - a very captivative write. Thanks for your charming comments on my Tanka Poetry, Mathew. I agree with you the drunkenness with the variety of wines poetry offers surely gives an extremely enlightening intoxication. Qualitatively this intoxication supercedes all other intoxications. Regards. -Mohammad
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Date: 12/3/2012 2:57:00 PM
love this magical write
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Date: 12/3/2012 12:21:00 PM
Nice write Mathew, I enjoyed this xx
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Date: 12/2/2012 6:46:00 PM
very beautiful! you've captured the magic of chanukah (or hanukkah) so well in this poem and it made me very happy to read it here...
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Date: 12/2/2012 4:16:00 PM
Nice write Mathew, I enjoyed it very much, candles are very magical they can be used for so many things, have a great day :)
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Date: 12/2/2012 11:21:00 AM
A lovely poem Matthew. - It sounded nice ... a: "The Festival of Lights" --- I have a poem called, "Light In The Darkness". - Thank you for reading my Haiku. - - Oxox / / Anne-Lise
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