Joseph May Poet Rhyme

MAGICAL

   The moon roams around in the sky
 Controlling the tides with its pull
  It changes shape on high
 and  is more powerful when it's full

 Magical Luna puts on a show
  as it glimmers on the sea at night
 Lovers find romance under its glow
 as they share kisses that delight

 When the sun casts earth's shadow on the moon
 as Luna orbits in an ellipse
 There will be a sign in the sky soon
 and we'll see a total lunar eclipse

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Paula Goldsmith December 29, 2023 at 8:20 AM Congratulations on being number 17 in the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup with your lovey/magical write. Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................

Smita Kulkarni December 16, 2023 at 10:26 AM Very cute poem on moon! Loved it!

Daisy Meadows December 15, 2023 at 10:54 PM A lovely magical poem. Well done.

Regina Elliott December 14, 2023 at 2:17 PM Enchanting moon poem, Joseph. A big FAVE. Thank you for my 1st Place finish in the funny Santa poetry contest. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Yuletide blessings. ~

Heidi Sands December 11, 2023 at 3:01 PM I love this poem Jodeph. So nice! A Fave for me :)

Anisha Dutta November 22, 2023 at 9:47 PM I also chosen the same theme. I agree, Moonbeam is truly magical. Blessings

Smita Kulkarni November 21, 2023 at 10:08 AM Lovely poem Joseph!!

Linda Alice Fowler November 21, 2023 at 5:55 AM Love this magical Luna, Joseph, from its power to its eclipse. :)

Judy Ball November 20, 2023 at 10:02 AM Beautiful Joseph. Often I see the moon when driving home in the early morning and I think how beautiful and magical it is. Good stuff. God Bless, JB

Valsa George November 17, 2023 at 9:12 PM You have described a magical scene .... a full moon night ! Under the glow of the moon, lovers find their rendezvous. Enjoyed this beautifully rhyming poem and Congratulations on your win.

Paula Goldsmith November 16, 2023 at 12:47 PM Back with Congratulations on your wonderful win. I loved reading your lovey/magical write again. Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................

Brandy Nicole November 15, 2023 at 7:54 PM Yes, I completely agree, the moon is magical; and your words caress softly around me. This is beautiful in every way, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Victor Buhagiar November 15, 2023 at 1:24 AM Perfectly composed. Blessings

Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2023 at 2:33 AM - It's really magical ... a beautiful poem, Joseph :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Bill Baker November 13, 2023 at 5:01 PM Magical poetry, Joseph. A very informative and well rhymed poem, my friend. Have a great day! Bill

Silent One November 13, 2023 at 1:40 PM Lovey poem with great rhymes and flow..

Ink Empress November 13, 2023 at 12:05 PM This surely is magical. Absolutely love the moon opening and how the rest of the poem flows with such descriptive ethereal imagery in such a descriptive manner. Beautiful. BOL for the contest. Pleasure reading this

Kim Rodrigues November 13, 2023 at 12:01 PM Very nice, Joe! Blessings!

Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2023 at 11:03 AM I like how you gave the magic to the moon. stellar! thanks too for the Halloween contest.

Paula Goldsmith November 13, 2023 at 9:12 AM A lovey/magical write. I really enjoyed it. I love the sky. Have a wonderful day/week writing away....................

Regina Mcintosh November 13, 2023 at 7:31 AM Beautiful and brilliant. Just love this, God bless you with a win and much love, Gina

Vijay Pandit November 13, 2023 at 6:50 AM It is all magical in the world above. Lovely ode to moon, Joseph.