MAGICAL

The moon roams around in the sky Controlling the tides with its pull It changes shape on high and is more powerful when it's full Magical Luna puts on a show as it glimmers on the sea at night Lovers find romance under its glow as they share kisses that delight When the sun casts earth's shadow on the moon as Luna orbits in an ellipse There will be a sign in the sky soon and we'll see a total lunar eclipse

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/29/2023 8:20:00 AM

Congratulations on being number 17 in the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup with your lovey/magical write. Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 12/16/2023 10:26:00 AM

Very cute poem on moon! Loved it!

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 12/15/2023 10:54:00 PM

A lovely magical poem. Well done.

Regina Elliott

Date: 12/14/2023 2:17:00 PM

Enchanting moon poem, Joseph. A big FAVE. Thank you for my 1st Place finish in the funny Santa poetry contest. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Yuletide blessings. ~

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/11/2023 3:01:00 PM

I love this poem Jodeph. So nice! A Fave for me :)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/22/2023 9:47:00 PM

I also chosen the same theme. I agree, Moonbeam is truly magical. Blessings

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 11/21/2023 10:08:00 AM

Lovely poem Joseph!!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/21/2023 5:55:00 AM

Love this magical Luna, Joseph, from its power to its eclipse. :)

Judy Ball

Date: 11/20/2023 10:02:00 AM

Beautiful Joseph. Often I see the moon when driving home in the early morning and I think how beautiful and magical it is. Good stuff. God Bless, JB

Valsa George

Date: 11/17/2023 9:12:00 PM

You have described a magical scene .... a full moon night ! Under the glow of the moon, lovers find their rendezvous. Enjoyed this beautifully rhyming poem and Congratulations on your win.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/16/2023 12:47:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your wonderful win. I loved reading your lovey/magical write again. Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/15/2023 7:54:00 PM

Yes, I completely agree, the moon is magical; and your words caress softly around me. This is beautiful in every way, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/15/2023 1:24:00 AM

Perfectly composed. Blessings

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/14/2023 2:33:00 AM

- It's really magical ... a beautiful poem, Joseph :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 11/13/2023 5:01:00 PM

Magical poetry, Joseph. A very informative and well rhymed poem, my friend. Have a great day! Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/13/2023 3:42:00 PM

such beautiful imagery, Joseph! The rhyme scheme was perfect...especially ellipse and eclipse...brilliant. I love lunar eclipses. enjoy your evening, Sara

Silent One

Date: 11/13/2023 1:40:00 PM

Lovey poem with great rhymes and flow..

Ink Empress

Date: 11/13/2023 12:05:00 PM

This surely is magical. Absolutely love the moon opening and how the rest of the poem flows with such descriptive ethereal imagery in such a descriptive manner. Beautiful. BOL for the contest. Pleasure reading this