Sam Kauffman Poet Choka

Magic Glasses

Magic Glasses

In the lost and found
One glitzy pair of glasses
Dusty - forgotten

Cast off and outcast?
Living in land of the lost
Corrections for sight

Mystic mystery
Calls to the curious heart
Like foghorns in mists

Wispy temptation
Weaves tendrils of enticements
Try me on just once?

Old world falls away
Neon bursts of astral fire
Lightning births dreams gold

Electric moonbeams
Possibility explodes
Breathing ideas

New cosmos emerge
Kaleidoscopic glory
Unclaimed magic found

Lost again - glitzy glasses

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Linda Alice Fowler August 21, 2023 at 2:05 PM Oh, this is really full of life and dreams and visions for all possibilities...and the sadness of loss. Congratulations Sam! :) Sam Kauffman August 31, 2023 at 10:40 AM Hi Linda! Thank you so much for your lovely feedback! When I saw this theme, Magic Glasses, I thought it sounded like fun to delve into the world of mysterious fantasy. Thanks for coming along on the journey. Hope you are well. Blessings!

Jay Narain August 21, 2023 at 10:56 AM Lost again, beautiful poem. Nice win. Sam Kauffman August 21, 2023 at 11:38 AM Thank you so much Jay! Hoping others will find these nomadic glasses! Blessings!

Janice Canerdy August 21, 2023 at 7:57 AM Sam, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this very descriptive and creative piece. Janice Sam Kauffman August 21, 2023 at 11:35 AM Thank you so much Janice! Such a fun contest that invited so much wonderful creativity! What an honor to share the podium! Sending you blessings!

Regina Mcintosh August 21, 2023 at 3:26 AM Oh, I just love it. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina Sam Kauffman August 21, 2023 at 11:30 AM Hi Gina! I am so glad you enjoyed this bit of fantasy! Had fun creating this scene of new and wonderful sights when putting on new eyes! Blessings and hugs sweet friend!

Kim Rodrigues August 20, 2023 at 6:20 PM Lost again so we might find them too and find the magic!! Congratulations, Sam, on 3rd place! Sam Kauffman August 20, 2023 at 9:05 PM This form is so fun, Kim. I had a delightful experience creating this story. What a wonderful form to tell a story. So blessed to have placed third among these wonderful poems on the winners list. Thank you! Blessings of mystical grace to you!!

Bill Baker August 15, 2023 at 2:52 PM Intriguing and delightful poetry, Sam. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Have a great week! Bill Sam Kauffman August 21, 2023 at 11:26 AM Hi Bill! Thank you so much for your delightful feedback! This contest was such fun with an opportunity to delve into the depths of fantasy and the fantastical - to be a little kid finding a treasure! Have a great week! Sending you blessings and a Texas size hug!

Andrea Dietrich August 15, 2023 at 11:19 AM This is so unique in its imagery and creativity. I bet you will win. I sure won't. haha Sam Kauffman August 21, 2023 at 11:19 AM Hi Andrea! This was such a fun contest. Found the inspiration for this from an old prompt. Had a good time turning it into a story. I loved your tsunami choka. Thank you for your feedback. Your notes always encourage me to find new words, images and ways to express ideas through poetry! Such a gift. Blessings to you!!

Sotto Poet August 15, 2023 at 11:16 AM I am consistently astounded by the ability to convey profound ideas using concise language. You crafted a delightful poem centered around the concept of enchanted spectacles. Good luck with the contest Sam Kauffman August 21, 2023 at 11:08 AM Dearest Lasaad, I am so grateful to you for your amazing feedback and constant support! Thank you! Once again, I have learned so much here in the soup. What a blessing you, and your poetic creations, are to me - inspiring me, teaching me, challenging me to find new ways to express poetry in new formats! It is truly a rare and beautiful gift! Sending you blessings! Have a wonderful week.

Paige Hind August 15, 2023 at 10:47 AM Whoah, Sam - gazam! LOL. I loved this; such a brilliant take on glasses! Sam Kauffman August 15, 2023 at 10:52 AM Hi Paige! Thank you so much! Your delightful message just made me :D! I came across this theme of magic glasses and thought it would be a fun story poem! Thanks for sharing in my delight! Blessings!

The Situation August 14, 2023 at 5:56 PM Like looking at babies on line getting on glasses for the first time. Sam Kauffman August 15, 2023 at 9:43 AM Hi there! Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to both read and give feedback! Very appreciated. All the best to you.