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'magic Carpets Are Real'

I went for a walk and there, at the side of the road was a carpet; looking old, unique and interesting, I picked it up and carried it home. I laid it out on the floor, it was worn, tattered and forlorn; yet, it held a certain beauty to me, so I spent several hours cleaning it. My Pearl Kitty sauntered into the room, and seeing the carpet stretched herself out; so I came to lay beside her kissing a soft head, and caressing her fur until we fell asleep. Over crystal clear lakes we flew, into lush green valleys and forest we drifted; settling beside a cool rippling stream, the carpet had taken us to a Nirvana land. Just me and my special "loved one" Pearl Kitty, thank goodness, we never fell off, I whispered; we explored and played for hours it seemed, then lay on our magic carpet and flew away home.
________________________________ August 5, 2012 Poetry/Narrative/"Magic Carpets Are Real" Copyright Protected, ID 08- 4114-18-05 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Magic Carpet Ride sponsor, A Skat, Judged 08/2012 First Place _______________________________ Featured Poem Week Of April 1, 2018

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Date: 4/8/2018 7:11:00 AM
So sweet. A beautiful poem and well deserving of a top win, BW.
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Date: 4/8/2018 5:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful pictures painted. Magic and 'carpe diem' with this beautiful poem. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 4/6/2018 1:50:00 PM
Beautiful.
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Date: 4/3/2018 8:04:00 AM
Your imagery is so uniquely a reflection of your soul gone right, I always recognize you, Broken Wings. I cannot believe this was not first place, it is for me!
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Date: 3/1/2017 7:27:00 AM
A sweet trip BW.
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Date: 9/5/2012 6:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in SKAT's "Magic Carpet Ride" contest Dear Heart. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2012 6:21:00 PM
CONSTANCE , A LATE CONGRATS WITH MY MAGIC CARPET RIDE CONTEST... CHEERS.. SKAT
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Date: 9/4/2012 12:26:00 PM
A wonderful trip to dreamland. Enjoyed this much. Congrats. :) Tanya
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Date: 9/1/2012 12:47:00 PM
Constance, a very nice lovely entry... much enjoyed your win,, always~PD
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Date: 9/1/2012 11:52:00 AM
A nice ride with your Pearl Kitty, Constance. Congrats on your super win. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 9/1/2012 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations what a wonderful ride and win xx
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Date: 8/31/2012 1:14:00 PM
A special tale to share with your cat. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/11/2012 2:36:00 PM
love this magical piece, my friend - hope you are feeling much better
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Date: 8/5/2012 11:35:00 AM
This is a very beautiful narrative my friend! This is quite the magic carpet ride! I love how you gave us some stanzas to describe where it came from and the cleaning of the carpet, a showing of compassion! Thus the carpet repaid the cleaning by a great ride throughout the forest and Nirvana! I loved this poem Constance! Awesome Work!!
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