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Magic Carpet Ride

Twisting and turning on tides of laughter, we rise and roll with wild abandon. Through sparkling sheens of summer rain, those gentle gems of glistening, gleaming drops, we fly freely upon this flamingo feathered carpet. Happily we ride along the heights of heaven, Gazing deep into galaxies that glow far beyond. Saturn's seductive rings slowly pull us forward, When suddenly we drop, diving low, dipping back into the darling glow of our moon. Then sweeping past the stars, smiling with delight, we sail off in the distance, shouting our goodnight. Now all the sights that we've seen shall swim within our dreams. Come take my hand as I take yours and we'll fly off toward tomorrow. Tanya Harrington © 07-30-2012 Inviting ~ Poet~Destroyer, Let's ride! For Skat's Magic Carpet Ride Contest

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Patrick Farley Iv

Date: 8/5/2013 5:28:00 PM

nice work! -Patrick Farley IV

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/5/2012 6:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in SKAT's "Magic Carpet Ride" contest Tanya. Love, Carol

Skat A

Date: 9/4/2012 6:20:00 PM

TANNAYA, , A LATE CONGRATS WITH MY MAGIC CARPET RIDE CONTEST... CHEERS.. SKAT

Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 9/2/2012 9:32:00 AM

congrats! good one

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 12:40:00 PM

TANAYA, THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!! It was an honor to ride with you... congratulations on your win..xox~pd

Joy Wellington

Date: 9/1/2012 11:43:00 AM

Congrats Tanya, a worthy win indeed! One love. Joy Wells

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/1/2012 6:14:00 AM

Congratulations what a wonderful ride and win xx

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/31/2012 11:43:00 PM

Good write. I can see why you garnered top spot in this contest. Congratulations.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/31/2012 1:12:00 PM

A magical ride, indeed. Congratulations.

Doreen Wright

Date: 8/16/2012 7:32:00 PM

This is going to give some competition to the contest! I think that this was beautfiully written. It is visual, seductive and very well written. I want to go on the ride with you and PD LOL! Good luck with this one!!

Honestly J.T.

Date: 8/9/2012 2:22:00 AM

Nice. this poem has my thoughts walking amongst the stars - JH

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/1/2012 9:38:00 PM

Hi Tanya, oooo !!! I can actually visual this ride. I love gazing at the stars. Now imagine that ride.. gazing at the wondrous galaxy. You kind of had me for a second when your line read... " When suddenly we drop " he he he~ For a second there I thought we fell.... What a lovely moon dive.. I love it..THANK YOU.... Like ALADDIN says... "IT"S A WHOLE NEW WORLD".. I'm so glad you took me on this ride.. ha ha..I needed the LIFT me up.. Get it! LIFT ME UP.... HUGS... xox~ PD (soup-mail)

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/31/2012 2:56:00 PM

I just love the twists and turns you have us go on in this magical ride of yours Tanya! I love the part where you bring us back into the "darling glow of our moon" I really liked that! This is an amazing piece my friend! Great Work!