Magic Bottle Glimmers

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Written, September 10, 2024
for the International Contest, Nursery Rhymes 7
Sponsor, Eve Roper, Judged 09/28/2024

FIRST PLACE

One day mom gave me a bottle sparkling, bright fairy pixie lights swirled around me; all about my room sparkles encircling, the twinkles from the bottle were set free ! Mom, what a wonderful glimmering light, a golden glowing magical dazzle; lights are floating up and down, left and right, oh, enchanted and in a bedazzle ! All about my room light is zip and zap, I don't want to lose the golden shimmers; so I try to catch them ... my hand the trap, oh, mom thank you for the glimmers !

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/30/2024 1:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write with a pretty picture. This makes me think about being young/catching fire flies at night. Have a great day with your win..................

Constance La France
Date: 9/30/2024 4:11:00 PM

Paula, thank you for the congratulations, compliment and comment, blessings, Constance

Jim Healey

Date: 9/29/2024 3:11:00 AM

Congrats on the win, Constance. Cheers from Newfoundland. Jim

Constance La France
Date: 9/29/2024 6:49:00 PM

Jim, thank you so much for the congrats, appreciate, Constance from Ontario

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/15/2024 12:59:00 AM

Your words are kind, happy so many others including you had happy ones! :)

Constance La France
Date: 9/16/2024 5:58:00 AM

Arthur, there are so many people like you, it breaks my heart, Constance

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/11/2024 12:06:00 AM

sadly this was not my mum, lovely poem!

Constance La France
Date: 9/14/2024 8:26:00 AM

Arthur, thank you for the compliment, I know how blessed I was to have loving parents (rip mom and dad) and so sorry your childhood was sad, Constance