Maestro Please

After the symphony my maestro arrived home
to a candlelight dinner just the two of us alone
still dressed in his tails he was quite debonair
while I was in my lace dress with my long hair,

The flickering light from the candles gave off a soft glow
sitting there eating talking about his orchestrated show
finishing up he walked over to where I sat
pulling me up from my chair as if I were a lithesome cat,

He led me to to the bear skin rug by the fireplace
and unzipped my lace dress with a loving look on his face
with both of our hearts racing we gently embraced
gentle kisses like wishes all over my neck and face,

Such passion I never knew could exist
the heat from the fireplace we never would have missed
hot feverish bodies entwined together on the rug
fitting perfectly together like a hand in a glove,

He played me like his own personal violin
stroking and stoking the smoky fireworks within
the crescendo building till the final climax
when our rigid sweaty bodies finally relaxed…



9-21-17
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Date: 10/7/2017 10:16:00 PM
Very romantic and sensual, Cheryl. There's just something about laying on a rug in front of a fire...nice poem,
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/8/2017 8:27:00 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit John!~Che :)
Date: 9/22/2017 4:37:00 PM
Yeah, this poem is fuego, fiery hot, Cheryl. Sorry, Cher ... sexual images were unavoidable when reading this erotic rendezvous. It had a nice romantic backdrop though. Sensuous write, sizzling hot. Loved it a lot. Love and hugs always.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/22/2017 6:43:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Freddie; I'm glad you liked the romantic rendezvous! (blush, blush!)~P & L~Che :)
Date: 9/22/2017 8:33:00 AM
Is it hot in here? Nicely done!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/22/2017 6:40:00 PM
Probably just the a/c on the blink lol! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mike!~ (blush, blush)~Che :)
Date: 9/21/2017 11:23:00 PM
Wow Cheryl...what a HOT romantic scene! Lovely and loverly too.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/22/2017 7:56:00 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Carole; I hope its more romantic sounding then sexually explicit! (blush, blush!)~Che :)
Date: 9/21/2017 9:12:00 PM
Wow! Reads like a beautiful, memorable night making wonderful music together!! Possibly in a chalet in the mountains. Great write!........Pat
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Date: 9/22/2017 7:54:00 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Pat; yes a chalet atmosphere would be fitting for them making wonderful music together!~Che :) (blush, blush!)
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