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Ever wrote a sequel To a poem about The road of dead bodies that you drove upon? I dont Think So^^ O. Yeah im laughing At such a radical idea Thats not registerd yet Into naiive-Like brain cells Yeah! Am laughing^^ Wish I could just throw My smile on that kid That lay stone cold Hand over ears even in death Died of the noises... Not laughing anymore? Thought so I just laid there staring Right ontop of him Dead silence... I panicked shoved my fist in his jaw I felt his bone crunch Now he doesnt have a screaming face Wow.... You think thats deep? The guy right next to the kid Was his dad They kept him alive to watch As his son burned then became death and soon a fossil And when they chunk this place again He will be dust ...His father He was right there ...To watch Now read those last three lines Again In Slow Mo Read it and weep Maybe the tears could drown A father who is still there to watch And spare him of the "Madness" "Well,if its what you want to call it. I mean you can call it unfair Inhumane Insane But its just Mad-ness"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 7/2/2009 8:37:00 AM
now this is fave worthy, madness is a terrible beauty when it unleashes itself. you have conquered it though and done it well. this was simply amazing. i feel it, maybe i too have gone mad :) well done! thanks for this! madison *now currently adding this to fave's*
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Date: 6/30/2009 3:53:00 AM
Daymne! This Is Deep Love! Just Wow. My Gawd. <33
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Date: 6/29/2009 4:19:00 PM
0mg this poem displayed an image in my head that i will never 4get. I like this poem. I'm new to the poetry soup world so if you can please read some of my work and tell me what you think. Please and thank you
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Date: 6/29/2009 3:39:00 PM
part on was so unfair to poets. but part two knocked my socks off. this was so deep so well writen so inspired by god. the technique the style was used to perfection. the point the emotional point was brought to the head. i actually repeated the line where instructed. you got a 7. this is an amazing piece and it will go on my fav list now. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 6/29/2009 2:16:00 PM
wow! your really good at creating images with your poem. forget giving u a 7 i want to give you a 1000000 [:
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