Madness(2)

Ever wrote a sequel
To a poem about 
The road of dead bodies
that you drove upon?

I dont Think So^^

O. Yeah im laughing
At such a radical idea
Thats not registerd yet
Into naiive-Like brain cells

Yeah! Am laughing^^

Wish I could just throw
My smile on that kid
That lay stone cold
Hand over ears even in death

Died of the noises...

Not laughing anymore?
Thought so
I just laid there staring
Right ontop of him

Dead silence...

I panicked
shoved my fist in his jaw
I felt his bone crunch
Now he doesnt have a screaming face

Wow....

You think thats deep?
The guy right next to the kid
Was his dad
They kept him alive to watch
As his son burned
then became death
and soon a fossil
And when they chunk this place again
He will be dust


...His father
    He was right there
      






...To watch


Now read those last three lines
Again
In Slow Mo
Read it and weep
Maybe the tears could drown
A father who is still there to watch
And spare him of the "Madness"


"Well,if its what you want to call it.
I mean you can call it unfair
Inhumane
Insane
But its just Mad-ness"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/2/2009 8:37:00 AM
now this is fave worthy, madness is a terrible beauty when it unleashes itself. you have conquered it though and done it well. this was simply amazing. i feel it, maybe i too have gone mad :) well done! thanks for this! madison *now currently adding this to fave's*
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Date: 6/30/2009 3:53:00 AM
Daymne! This Is Deep Love! Just Wow. My Gawd. <33
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Date: 6/29/2009 4:19:00 PM
0mg this poem displayed an image in my head that i will never 4get. I like this poem. I'm new to the poetry soup world so if you can please read some of my work and tell me what you think. Please and thank you
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Date: 6/29/2009 3:39:00 PM
part on was so unfair to poets. but part two knocked my socks off. this was so deep so well writen so inspired by god. the technique the style was used to perfection. the point the emotional point was brought to the head. i actually repeated the line where instructed. you got a 7. this is an amazing piece and it will go on my fav list now. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 6/29/2009 2:16:00 PM
wow! your really good at creating images with your poem. forget giving u a 7 i want to give you a 1000000 [:
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