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Fierce tempest slams its maddened jeer while gush of flood crashes offshore ; then to our village…loud winds roar as piercing thunder grows severe: Upon tide's crest pale mollusk floats Adrift in waste, oaks droop away That cabins old swish in the bay, Rattling wooden docks and tugboats. At last, end of hour’s pour departs -- glints the sunlight reigning morn’s climb to lift day’s qualm and wake fresh lime, of scented air easing men’s hearts. In prayer , we ask Mother Earth for weather tranquil like skies blue , vowing to tend nature, anew till forests bloom, this life’s rebirth. 8/20/2019 'We would stand a better chance of survival if we accommodated ourselves to this planet and viewed it appreciatively...” E.B. White ------------------- Writing Challenge 2, August 2019 – Enclosed Rhyme Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Date: 8/23/2019 3:10:00 PM
Stormy weather can leave the land and our homes devastated. Especially where you live Nette. We also have to be aware of tsunamis and hurricanes. The last hurricane turned last minute and missed our island but hit Kauai hard. It took them over a year to get back on their feet. I believe there were only two hotels there and both were hard-hit. It would have really destroyed our harbor boats and homes if it had hit on Oahu. This is a great poem my friend. I am happy to see it on the winners list! Congratulations! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/23/2019 11:54:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your Enclosed Rhyme, wonderful writing as usual ~
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Date: 8/23/2019 4:33:00 AM
There has been some really bad weather around the globe in the last several years. I believe this is preparing those who are left behind for what they will face during the tribulation. Enjoyed reading your winning work. Congrats on being in that list. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
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Date: 8/22/2019 11:34:00 PM
Congratulations my friend. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/21/2019 9:07:00 PM
This poem is not only beautiful but inspires to keep us aware of doing our part to keep earth clean Nette. I am sure this will secure a top spot! xxoo
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Date: 8/21/2019 10:27:00 AM
After the storm comes the welcome sunshine. Loved your verse nette. Tom
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Date: 8/21/2019 8:50:00 AM
This is like a mad manic nursery rhyme, I like it. HugsRick
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Date: 8/21/2019 8:26:00 AM
This is a great enclosed rhyme with wonderful contrast. I can see this and feel it as I read it :)
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Date: 8/21/2019 8:08:00 AM
I like what you wrote...I imaged you listening to the thunder... Good Luck...
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Date: 8/21/2019 8:07:00 AM
Very beautiful and nicely crafted Nette. I hope this odes well in the contest.
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